World With You

Very generic but in a bad way. I don't like beastmasters who treat their pets as a tool. MC basically call his bird stupid repeatedly. And I don't see any interaction of MC with his pet other than training and insulting.

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An action-packed novel, cultivation, and rich world background. We start the adventure of the mc. The fight scenes are good and the story is quite engaging. Keep up the work and good luck!

First time doing a review but I gotta say this book is very interesting. Loved the world building so far and I'm already shipping the MC with the female childhood friend. All and all what I wanted to say is keep it up!~

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MC chino diciendo cosas de chino y sobre todo haciendo el ridículo

Gah.  Can there be a perfect introduction to a novel?  If so, this one is it.  These 60 chapters are as perfect as any novel introduction can possibly be.  As a whole they do everything they need to in order to introduce the setting and characters, and challenge them at the same time.  It's perfect.