Son of Dark Fortune

Prediction, One of the godly omega cultivator will play league of legends, the time he lost his iron promos will be the day when the city go red

So it has been a while since i started reading this series and so far it is great the world building is good showing aspects overtime and showing the universe ring and earth and how the two worlds affect one another. Another aspect I like is Nero and his reincarnation which instead of a typical future self take past self body it is the future self acting like a guide to nero who does not give everything and only hints and some explanations and is an interesting take on the concept and adds to the diversity of ideas in the series. Another part i like is the skill system with the mastery to increase its power instead if just levelling up and not really mastering it fully. I also liked how he was affected by his mothers coMa and how he would have been a hollow shell fighting and killing and also how it had lasting affects like making him colder to others around him. So if you want something new to read try this

It cant even clean shoes of cultivation chat group. There is nothing likeable if you are not into "oh look at me, im better than everyone else even people who are clearly better than me"

I can see "My Disciples Are All Villains" vibe or not? and still i waiting the Raw🙏 sorry my poor english....................................................

Teenage awkwardness, just the way I like it.Grammar has minimal errors, nothing another once over can't fix. Prose is good, and dialogue flows naturally. Might want to flesh out some of the single line dialogue IMO, just to give it a bit more spice.Keep on writing, I want more of this. 👍

MiuNovel’s writing brings you to another world. Enjoyed the colosseum scene. Not that much gore but the scene is described colourfully. Easy to imagine the world.

the three brothers, white jack, black jack and jack black                                                                                  .

"It's none of your business. You just have to keep an eye on her, report to me, and you'll get your money. By the way, you shouldn't tell anyone about this... Remember your sick daughter needs the money."