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PilinyTheYounger
- Joined
- July 1,2024
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Well, the chapter was to short,but it's good and have a potential
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The idea of playing games to heal oneself is a great concept. It's also cinematic. I enjoy reading this book. Keep up the good work, good sir!
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Its quite engaging, emotional and gets you having these mixed emotions about everything. Its a good emotional read. Loving it so far. Keep up d good workđ
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Seemed really interesting to me so far, The writing and story are pretty good, please keep up the good work!
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I'm absolutely amazed by the storyline I've only seen a little so far, but I'm already hooked! I can't wait to see all the twists and turns that are coming next
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I've read up to chapter 10 and I've been enjoying the story so far the author seems to already have the background of the world formed and informs us without a dump of information the battles seem well written and I didn't see many writing errors the prologue was a bit confusing but it's possible combine the clues with the information given in the chapters
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I came to read your novel as you suggested, and you captured my interest right from the beginning. The quality of your writing is impressive! I do feel that strengthening your characters a bit more could enhance the story even further. My honest opinion is that while the story is already good, it has the potential to be even better with a little more attention to its development. Iâm not criticizingâitâs already enjoyableâbut I believe refining it will take it to the next level. You know what I mean! đ I truly think this novel has a bright future. Wishing you the best of luck!
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This is actually the type of novel I love so I'm going to take my time to read it đ„șif I love it might finish it.
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Sorry to have taken the first review, but someone's got to be first, right? đAs promised, this is part of the series, although not the promised book "Mafia Entanglement" after a word with my CE, I was advised to release this first. Mafia Entanglement will be released on a later date. I do hope you'll all give this a read and give it your support too. I guess the continuation of this series will be determined by how successful this novel is or isn't.Once again, I do hope you enjoy the read, and I look forward to your lovely comments and supportđ«Ąđ„°
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Yo estoy leyendo el manhwa y estĂĄ buenĂsimo ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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The story is interesting and exciting and you all should try it. Every fan of Interstellar novels should check it out.The Characters, the plot and the setting is just perfect.
I CHOSE to be a VILLAIN, not a THIRD-RATE EXTRA!!