Even I have become a beautiful girl, but I was just spending my time playing as a Net-Game addict

This usually isn't a type of book I would personally pick out, but I was pleasantly surprised by how organized and efficient the author presented it. It's very in-depth in a professional understanding as well as giving ”highschoolers” a better look as they were exhibited as mature, secure giving, devoted individuals that sought out a dream to become an idol and I honestly believeufffc even with the struggles and the determination of others wanting their downfall, they will succeed! I also wanted to make a point, the ”Manger, ” may have had his struggles, to this day, but with the determination, he broadcasts in gaining the audience to promote the ”Cherry Blossoms, ” I honestly feel that he may like it more then he realizes. Maybe it's not just about the money he will earn by managing this idol club?!One suggestion I would consider is to check out ”Grammarly, ” it is a fantastic program that helps with punctuation and grammatical errors. Within your story, I have noticed a couple of errors, as well as the changing of characters ”Pov.” It can get a little confusing regarding who is talking at the moment; I suggest titling the top of each change though it is nothing major, I believe it will help the flow and overall understanding of your story.

Not bad it  is well written and there is room for development with some creativity you should be able to get up and in no time                        

*STOP BEING WEAK! HOW LONG MUST WE PLAY TO YOUR TUNE! THE WOMAN IN FRONT OF US IS NO LONGER YOUR TEACHER! KILL HER! KILL HER! KILL HER!*

"If he really does that, Big Sis will suddenly show herself here tomorrow... Ahahahahaha," answer Viltus

Then, why is he here?

Cheng Yang also didn't pretend to be cold. As long as the other side asked about things, if he could answer them he would. However, for the stuffs that shouldn't be said, he would casually fooled his way past them. It was easy to fool someone that doesn't know much about the apocalypse.

I said yep what a concept

would give full remarks if I didn't come when the author publishes 3 chapters a week. this story i chanced upon but found really enthralling. the pace and development is slow yet fast. it's a remarkable find in a stack of underwhelming stories being published all the time. I'm caught up to chapter 418 now after binge reading and find myself feeling destitute that I have to wait for the next chapter with how enthralled I've been.