Love is... First Love?

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This novel has an interesting premise. That, however, is quite literally the only positive aspect of the novel, in my opinion. Interactions are highly superficial, depictions of the wealthy and nobility are skewed, and the characters are so bland that it makes you wonder if any thought was put into making them come across as humans. From the very beginning, there are some plot points that take away from the reading experience. The main character, who is supposedly 10 years old, acts like a robot. The author seems to believe that blind people are also emotionless. The plot is also severely lacking, progressing so quickly that it creates utter disbelief. The whole process, from the protagonist getting adopted by his foster family to the publication of his first book and the establishment of his own company, takes mere months. The protagonist publishes (plagiarizes) a masterpiece like The Hobbit while having been blind for most of his life without the necessary education or an adequate sense for the intricacies of literature. It is justified with the excuse of him being a genius, but that makes no sense. I doubt that there exists a single ten-year-old in the world who has such an astounding grasp of the language and an innate understanding of the challenges that come with being a writer. Granted, that is not his own ability, but everyone apart from the protagonist believes otherwise, which contradicts basic common sense. These, of course, are just a few examples of the jarring plot points that shifted my perspective from that of a reader to that of a critic. Finally, I would still like to congratulate the author for taking the difficult step of writing this novel. Although my review might seem extremely harsh, I hope that the author, assuming that my review comes to their attention, understands that my frustration towards this novel stems from the fact that it shows a lot of wasted potential.

Me encanta esta historia, los personajes y las situaciones son increíbles, aparte de las personalidades son excelentes, amo está historia. Una cosa que no me gustó fue la parte en donde les hicieron los exámenes para determinar el potencial de los participantes, me hubiera gustado que todo fuera más secreto.

If you ever wanted to continue this, wnmtl.org has a good machine translation of this book, It just has a few incorrect terms n misgenders the mc a lil bit

can anyone tell me about the tags? any romance or evolution or something like that there

Hi I like your book because it has good context and the way you right is good and it seems like you know what you are writing and I wish you carry one writing thanks.

Seems to have some influence from Japanese light novels. Good characters and an interesting plot so far, will be interesting to see what happens.

the concept is good but the execution is soo terribly bad .i love an evil mc or a profit oriented mc that does what ever it take to achieve his goal but forcing the plot to limit an evil mc is just bad .if you wanna make an evil mc he need to be in control of everything he need to be 1000 steps over his enemy not some mc who only react never attack .btw the story flow is so slow with one relevant chapter in every ten.