Strong opening and all, I want to see how far this can go it's really going to be a nice ride

It was a really enjoyable read so far, im caught up and its good, the only flaw I see is that everything its going to fast, I would recomend to take a slower pace but world and characters are likable.

The switch in POV’s was a tad confusing, but other than that it was a good readIt got better in every new chapter PS— The elevator story is the best one yet

I AM A REAL RYU !! I AM NOT A FAKE RYU !!

so far I'm liking it . It just got published though

Great book author, I really love Lucius progression. Also love the character dynamics of the book

"I just finished reading your novel, and I’m honestly blown away. The way you’ve crafted the story is nothing short of amazing. From the very first page, I was hooked. The plot is so engaging and full of twists and turns that I couldn’t put it down. The characters feel so real—each one with depth and complexities that made me care about them deeply. Your writing style is beautiful, flowing effortlessly and pulling me into the world you’ve created. I was constantly surprised by how you balanced suspense and emotion, keeping me on the edge of my seat one moment and bringing me to tears the next. It’s clear you’ve poured your heart into this story, and it truly shows. I can’t wait to see where this journey takes you next. Keep writing, you’ve got something special here!

The Adolfo twist was a nice touch, will just bookmark it for now since there is only 20 chapters.

hey author u are good at writing and I hope u continue. I'm very interested in where you will end up. I haven't read much yet though so I cant give u constructive criticism to help u. plus people who is straight up toxic in there criticism are not worth following it because a lot of the time they didn't even read it and because of ur bio here is a lot of love (hugs u tightly and kisses ur cheek with lots of cuddles)

keep updating for more power stoneslove from India

Nice story. I think I tried on this book

My Dao of Shameless knows no bounds. 5* review by the author.