- #114
This script don't sounds oddly familiar. No,not at all.
I hope Natsu don't wants to call his first son Batsu.
Except unless you are a SERIOUS narutard convinced everything rips off your "masterpiece, it really doe snot..
The difference between Naruto and this(apart from this not being written by typewritter monkeys) is that Natsu's promise is far more sensible and fitting - he is not promising to bring back a runaway romance. He is reassuring Lucy that he will put the guild back together n o matter what and asking to trust him for now no matter how weird his actions might seem. Nardo made a childish reassurance to a deadweight character for a selfish wish. Natsu is not "reassuring" Lucy or promising something - he is asking for her trust because he knows she has problems with that after everyone left.
Either way it has absolutely no similarities to Naruto and Lucy looks uncomfortable with Nasu hiding stuff from her - certainly won't help her trust issues.