Amazing but I hope the family is not all dead specially the 4 kids and mom and that. More chapter needed

I need more characters omg! This is the most interesting book I have read in a while. The characters are so realistic and the romantic tension keeps me on my toes

Love it can’t wait for more 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Author tried a bold attempt in writing 27 chapter long prologue and it worked. System - Most broken system you could ever find.Schemes - If I were to summarize prologue, I could say there is no such thing as free will in this world.No matter how powerful one is - they can not escape their 'Destiny' granted by the heavens.MC reaches a level where he can End realities but still can't escape his Destiny.Destruction - checkCosmology - checkFriendship  - checkThis novel has potential if this goes at this pace.

I don't like the writing style. It isn't what I usually read. To say it is not novel-like. I would say it is amateur writing. The rest is good but needs improvements in the writing style. 4.0/5

Has good world background and character progression

Overall really good so far and I look forward to more! There were a few things that I didn’t like or felt could have been better but most of those were minor and mostly personal opinions. Good work, just need more chapters.

if you like Kings Avatar, you will like this one too as I am 99% sure the author was heavily inspired by it. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATARM. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR. IT IS NOT A COMPLETE COPY OF KINGS AVATAR

I think the book is amazing personally...Read it you might like itAnd give ratings ,like ,comment and add to you library too

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This is an amazing book, good job author.

it's a nice start, waiting to see how the story develop 🤘😎