The Invincible Monster

Great book…will there be a part 2?

well i believe that mc is too much op. also in the beginning you can see some reason in the history, but later on all the chapters run between sex, sado and masochism, also the mc has a 2 ia´s helping him, one inside him, other outside, but in a magical ring. when you look at it you are jumping between universes where there is magic, tech, potion, aliens, elven, gods, alchemy long live people and time changing paradox. but all it is inside a whirlpool around the mc. where he just do as he like, also he has a complex with his parent, whenever he is. in a time place his 10 y.o mother is his babysitter, but in the next reality he is saving/ taking control of earth and he is about to have sex with her own mother that in that reality has 20 y.o  although all those chapters are a little fun, but breaking and jumping that way made the novel too much heavy, where some times one has to ask when or where some sideline will continue or how. also the author take too much from others people ideas or novel, just to spice his own work. it was funny but when you used something too much its work backwards. i do think that the author should calm down a little bit, take care about some of the ideas or realities  or follow them to a certain degree. not just jumping like crazy every 3-6 chapters and using just the time mastering as glue to unify everything here. the potential for a great novel its here, but it needs to work and polish a little more to be there

Im up to ChApter 30 and he still hasnt made any monsters…. just one jade guard that can only guard agaisnt threats he already know about and not suprise attacks.  

Aunque es pronto para decirlo ya que la novela no tiene muchos capítulos, me gusta como se desarrolla, es mucho mejor que las novelas chinas normales ya que aunque muchas son muy buenas siempre tienen sus defectos, como a veces son racistas, considerándose seres superiores y oprimidos por todos los países (ej. Eu, japón, Corea, etc) se considera sin defectos, o alaban descaradamente a su gobierno como perfecto, o incluso el protagonista es un imbecil ya que puede matar a sus enemigos, conseguir bellas chicas o destruir el mundo y se contenta con ser un don nadie o se vuelve arrogante y casi lo matan.Está novela no es así, el protagonista es centrado, sabe que no es invencible ni el pez más grande, confía no solo en su sistema, sino en su experiencia de vida anterior como un hombre exitoso para salir adelante y predecir a sus enemigos y no se anda por las ramas con las mujeres, no solo toma la mano de una chica en 200mcapitulos,mismo que se acuesta con ellas y no está obsesionado con su pureza y aunque es un poco vacilante al principio sigue sus propios deseos. Por último la novela está bien escrita y el autor está haciendo encajar las partes bien, protagonista entretenido, chicas hermosas con personalidades diferentes y sus desarrollos (con sexo) y tramas futuras xianxia o sobrenatural. Creo que merece leerse y tiene mucho potencial de desarrollarse, puede llegar a ser como las grandes novelas pero única como against the gods, abandoned son.

I like the premise on which the story is build on and would like to read more.                                                                                                      

top tier hidden gem right here!is was honestly suprised by it. the grammar, spelling and description of the world are faultless and pretty good. you have good fleshed out characters with an amazing mc that perfectly portrais what i think is a funny half-sane lich. the story is progressing nicely in the 52 chapters i read currently and i am hopefull for whats to come. this book deserves way more attention and is addicting.sry if my english isnt good, im not a native.

Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA

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