it’s too early to really say anything about the characters, but so far the seem fundamentally intriguing, I can’t wait to see were this goes🙌

I love the gamelike structure and the mystery games that Eris and her crew had to go through. Go Eris.... 😃. I enjoy the trainigs and each new realm they encounter. I hope this continued and doesnt end up unfinished.  

good writing style, interesting characters ,keep it up ,

True villain mc with cunning and manipulation....a perfect novel ....it has way too much potential...just don't drop it author

This novel have a fresh story within it, I guarantee you will not be bored to read it. Why? Didn't I tell you that the story from this novel is fresh? The story is different from other novels and very interesting, this might be a new wind for the novel world.

Interesting bookStarted reading and just couldn’t stop❤️

I totally love your use of words, your metaphorical expressions and how real and authentic you are, you’re doing a good work here, I just hope you would indent the paragraphs properly , it makes reading easier. Either ways , I going to see the end of this book. You can also check out mine; A Millionaire Up North, and leave a review , I’ll do much appreciate that.

Book is pretty good, I haven’t read to far into it but it is very funny and has an interesting premise.

as a recommendation i suggest rewriting the story for more of a coherent flow besides that it is good

review for FP.....................................

I like the story and the plot I just hate the story development because it’s TAKING VERY VERY LONG im currently in chapter 160 I think and only one month has passed in the story which can tell a lot because I recently read another novel which at around chap 160 I mostly think that this is taking so long because the author adds MANY Unnecessary details such as (this is a small spoiler) for anyone that likes that story when you get to the part where mc (frost) assist Leo in his fight with his uncle when the attack starts you can skip the next 15 chapters which would be a total waste of time and many other parts where author just spends 3-5 chapters just explaining minor details

Great start, writing is great but confusing at times. Characters are great and a great first chapter.