The Man of Steel

my favourite completed novel on this site and second only to mother of learning . I read a lot so being my second favourite book is really impressive . the best part about this novel is the character growth and that everyone has a believable motivation. go read it you will not be disappointed .

1.the author cant do basic math2.a never ending army3.The mc is dumb4.The others redicule him in the chat which doesnt make any sense   because if they redicule him he might not sell foos for gold coins   anymore5.Mc is the only smart one  here is an example: the game gave them gold coins, so if one thinks   logicly gold coins should have a use6.how does he get the corpses of the monsters if the holy light bugs   devour them

To: AuthorThe concept was good and interesting but the execution was disappointingThe main things that got me to drop this were that You over explain things, You under explain things, The story was rushed and The emotions didn’t feel realistic Partly because it was rushed but also because it didn’t feel like you had a good enough grasp of the emotions you’re trying to bring to the table I guess you could sayAnd of course the Slight but annoying grammar errorsI’m not trying to say that you don’t have talent or that you should give up I’m just saying that this could be better and that it was disappointing

It's a  good read..........'..................................................................................This is so.hard I.do.not have anything to.add.to the fact that you should read this story it's good and you will enjoy it why do thay.make me put a 140 ch when it can be said in like 15

I absolutely love the Mc's character design. So far also love the two lovers of hers as well. Her family is sweet as well and love Diamond to pieces.

ufffc

one month passed Nisha and Reuben were still recovering from what had happened they were coming close as the day was passing as both of them were on same boat .

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