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I'm addicted. I've read the advanced chaptes on toodatfiction and I love how the fantasy elements seems so negligible. It reminds me of that manhwa about the assasin reincarnated into the body of a police but also very different. I am excited to read the future chapters.

A solid novel with well-crafted descriptions and a good sense of realism. The attention to detail adds depth to the scenes, making them engaging. Keep up the good work, though there is still room for improvement

overall kinda average kind of novel in this app basically a more light hearted version of shadow slave with fantasy world building elements with an annoying horny undertone that happens for 50% of the novel from chapter 5 onwards other than that over all average nothing majorly good or bad

So far so good 👌 One of the better stories out there. With many reincarnation and transmigrations novels out there, this feels like a well needed break. The first few chapters are packed with chaos and lots of actions, allowing you immerse into the story. You won't even realize you finished the story. If you are looking for something different, then I strongly recommend this story. It has potential to become something amazing 🔥

This book is very inspiring, I hope to go this journey with our mc and grow along the way ☺️nice work.

i am liking this new cover! 😲the color change and everything is good

hehe boi new book from you , i will definitely read it

I love this story from the beginning to the end is a top notch. Ivy is just a bad sister. Well the novel is awesome, it's a must to try out. Just added to collections

The book is great, i feel very good resonance with it, it's not your normal weak mc or too op one, this mc Is likeable and in middle. Also the story background and premise are perfect for those easy going readers. OVERALL ID SAY YOU OUTDID YOURSELF AUTHOR SAN

Good mid tier. The writing is decent, the smut is decent, the development is okay. MC might be a bit retarded, but some of his actions seem realistic. But who doesn't understand what 'control' means? Either way, it was fun while it lasted but I don't see myself ever paying to read.

Wow, your story is amazing! The characters are really well developed, and I love how the plot moves forward. Every chapter makes me want to read more, especially with those cliffhangers