"Doyouknowhowlongi'vebeenwaitingforthis?"

ဇာတ်အိမ်ဖွဲ့ထားတာ အရမ်းမိုက်u200cတယ် bro . ဖတ်ရတာရိုးမသွားဘူး ။ဟာသလေးတွေပါ ပါတော့ ရယ်လဲရယ်ရတယ်။ ဆရာကျန်းရဲ့ သွေးမျိုးဆက်ကိုတော့ လိုချင်မိသား။ ရောင်းဖို့ရှိရင်လဲ ပြောပါအုံး ဝယ်ချင်လို့၊😁😁

my first novel. give feedback on anything that i messed up on or that I could improve upon.

I love it! 49 chapters before it became premium is worth it!

i like the tragic beginning and the relatable quest for survival.

When i first saw the title, I thought it was just going to be a very sad, tragic story...but damn, there's tension, romance and chemistry between the leads...I truly hope they get their happy ending, Thanks Elf_queen, I'm loving this novel so far.

The characters are alive. That's the only thing I can say in this book aside from a complex story that was written well.There are some sudden shifts in perspectives but it does not bother the reader at all. It's an innocent mistake from a newbie author. Keep it up author, you can do it!I feel like Aidan has a reason why he's bullying his twin brother, Lucian. The story is so intriguing and engaging that I forgot this is a work of fiction. I'll be waiting for the next updates.

like the concept of the power, and the atmosphere feels a bit biting you know, all in all good, but i don't know if this is a translation error from this platform or not, but there are some sentences that are not so relevant in my language.

Shameless author here ;)Casually giving myself 5 stars as extra motivation on top of all my beloved readers who willingly read my stories (I hope...)Now then... I guess I should go over what you may expect from my story.—"Who is the Main Character?" The main character is a girl named Lillian Ker Arius, who was previously a player from her previous world and achieved 100% in the world she is now in.—"What is the world about?" The World of Millis was a Rom-Com RPG that existed back in her old world, and it seems to have become her reality now. In this world, she must face monsters that appear inside/outside of gates.—"What type of person is Lillian?" She is someone who strives for fun in life, having lived through a life of boredom. However... she is pretty boring as a person. But I do hope you all would come to love her!—"Will she be overpowered?" Maybe...? It's definitely a possibility at the rate that she is going, but I won't put the tag in just in case she doesn't live up to the expectations.—"Will there be romance?" Absolutely, but it's going to be a slow one, I think...—"If there is romance, will there be a harem!?" I mean... Lillian would surely be around very attractive people... and if there is, it would definitely be a maximum of two—no more. But let's see ;)—"What exactly is the story going to be like?" I am going to try to make it dark. But ehhh... it will most likely be wholesome anyway!—"How often are you releasing chapters?" I am currently trying to write two chapters a day. But that may go down to one for a while due to RL stuff. I assure you guys that you will get chapters, though! :D—FINALLY...! "Don't you think giving yourself five stars is a bit much? Is this story really worth it?" Of course, I am full of myself! What author wouldn't be when there are people who are willing to try out their story? I am already feeling a bit giddy over my current collections! But anyway! I can't tell you whether or not my story is worth it or not. That will just depend on whether or not you would be willing to give it a try :DIf any of you have any questions that I haven't answered, please do let me know in the comments!

reviewing for the sake of reviewing for the sake of fast pass

Nice start... keep going Author, I'll follow all your books!!!

Interesting.Would love to read more of it.