this novel is better than previous version

每当我用中文写评论时，往往是出于我对祖国的热爱与自豪。然而今天，我用中文书写，是因为作者与我同样是中国人。看到一位同胞在这个平台上，感到非常欣慰！衷心祝愿你在写作之路上披荆斩棘，勇攀高峰，超越他人，创造属于自己的辉煌！！！                                             

I'm loving the book already , i really feel you all should give it a try. Author please release more chapters already.

Great novel, the premise is greatAs of now(chp 11)A few things to mention There are potential but they are not important as it seems it can be increased by training or evolving The grammar is not bad but there are a few spelling mistakes( it nothing to big)The novel is set in the past and from what I can gather it nether our world or the Pokémon world( it called Gaia it similar to Pokémon world but not the same I feel like)The mc is the 10th son of dukeIt seems like he is hiding his potential(they think he is average not bad) at the start which I do not like but at least he is not like those protagonist who get stepped on

well I'll review this book based on the first 11 chapters I read.World Building: even though it's still fairly early the author managed to introduce a lot of elements about the world that makes it very alive and interesting  wich makes me very excited to explore it.Charachters: so far we have only been introduced to 4 Charachters but they are all unique in their own way no 2 charachters have felt similar, and it seems the girls will be more then just "trophies" for mc.Power System: veryyyy new and original not the  clishe "mana and elements

if you want to kill your brain cells to read smut, there are better novels

Is this story based on NTRMAN's Adelaide Inn game?

I hope you all come to see my work I'll try to update as much as I can

This is one of the most unique and interesting stories I have found. I love Baldwin's character! I think everyone who reads your story will love him too. Keep up the good work author!

i just can't help leaving a second review  this book is absolutely amazing  like, words can't explain how much I'm in love with the characters, the writer explain the emotions, tension and scenerio so well, i surprised the book is not popular, give this book a try guys, its really worth it. The beginning might not be what you want but it gets really interesting as you progress. what are you waiting for, go on and start reading ☺️😅

Loved it.                              

The story is nice but it needs improvement in part of the explanation.Also Make bed scenes little more explainable