Transmigrated As The Tribe Chief In A Primitive World!

[Shut down imminent]

He went quiet for a time after that, his face somewhat pale as he realized the implications behind my statement. More like common sense. Castletown was in the opposite direction from the battle. Apparently it would have no traffic aside from the Cleaner Crews that looted the dead and reinforcements from towns and cities that lay deeper within the Grenadia Kingdom.

Max didn't kill any of them, they weren't any threat to him. Besides he didn't wish to make thing easier for Van Helsing.

Well if you wouldn't know LT means Little Theater.

Afinal eu faço muitas coisas como o treino e isso consome mais da metade do meu dia para tentar ficar mais forte.

A good start, with minimal grammar errors and good prose. This'll go far given enough time. Dialogue flows organically, but you might want to flesh it out a bit more. Describe the character's cadence or subtle mannerisms during dialogue to give it more impact and individuality. Other than that? I'll see what becomes of this after a few more chapters. Keep on writing 👍

This story is amazingly written and pulls you in right away. The events and actions of the character as well as their personalities are outside of the usual and expected. You never know what will happen. Each is a mystery to be solved, and leaves you with a slew of thoughts and emotions for every action the characters take. This book is definitely worth reading. If you haven’t started and are wondering if you should, the answer is every moment you waste considering is a moment you could have enjoyed reading this book.

great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised.Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read.other than that great job author, keep it up