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More update pleaaaaaaaaassseeeee. Nicely written novel. Better than your works before. Good job! And good luck writing. I think webnovel would love to pick this up for their original content.

The story has a good amount writing and progresses at a manageable pace and for once the main character is not a wimp that gets fooled by every pretty face he sees.

Nice premise no swordsman BS but a hunter instead. Completely ruined by the games P2W mechanics that author has ingeniously used to turn an VRMMO into a generic mobile game. MC motivation in gaming is to make money to pay off depts. Within the free chapters he has completed 2 hidden quest and special scenario boss and several material request no one else could fulfill. He has barely made enough money to pay for his expenses in the game. The most basic of things cost absolutely retarded amounts of gold which the only way to properly farm is apparently by buying it with real money. His class most basic abilities are locked behind a slot machine system that requires real money to operate. He has learned no production skills what so ever despite the absolutely retarded cost of arrows/traps/pet food these basic items that his class needs. He has spent 60000+ of dollars just on the stuff his class needs while constantly remarking how he is envious of the rich big shots. He has a cheat that gives him knowledge no one else has access to and yet even with that he has made no progress to even paying of the monthly fees of the dept. Chinese microtransaction gaming culture taken to level where it actually ruins the entire novel. Who cares about the characters? Or the world? Or the story? When every fúcking chapter is MC inserting a credit card just to barely be able to function properly in-game...

Great story and all. But the age of the MC makes people hate him. How can a toddler be so lustful and the women who try seduce a little child like that is disgusting not entertaining. If you changed the age of the MC to around 12 then it would be more understandable not a little toddler under 2ft bossing around old men

I definitely think you could improve in some areas.As said in other reviews, the grammar is quite poor but you can't be blamed for this as this site isn't exactly made for English stories, rather translations and for people who are attempting to start grasping the English language, which is difficult, mind you! I do love the idea of the story, I really do, so keep up with that! Character design is a little bland but I feel if that can be improved in later chapters and or by adding in some more descriptions in earlier chapters, say if you were to go back and review them.Overall, 3/5! This isn't bad at all! Really good start, and I'm excited to see where this'll go!Let me know if you'd like me to go through the first 10 chapters, for instance, and give them a pass-over to make the style better fit for English readers! Free of charge, of course!

great novel, well written and thought out overall; I have only 2 thibgs i think could be improved upon. First, more constant updates would be great if the quality isnt compromised.Second is a bit more attention to details, i will give an example: when abijm saves the prince from the light church's attack, theres a part where both he and the knights run towards the prince, the novel says he is 15 meters away from the knights so thwy qould need like 5 seconds to get to him.. how is that possible? thats like... even lower than a regular human walking speed?? i know it might seem irrelevant but this kibd of mistakes can pile up and its a bit frustrating to read.other than that great job author, keep it up