Okay this is my review!World Building: I think this is an aspect that was his strength and pretty much well planned. By far it was okay and was well established.Pacing: It was slow but fine. Well tuned up and Narration was fun and funny sometimes.Writing quality: Grammar is fine but there are typos here and there. Needed to be rechecked as it destroys the flow. Also synopsis needs to be reworked. Strengths: Story, Plot, World building, NarrationWeakness: Grammar, typos, Synopsis

Noobs, listen to your big bro. You have managed to come and read this MASTERPIECE. Thank your mom and dad for giving you birth🥸

Personally I really like the novel. Also it's really unique especially when you're looking for an MC who's all about wits and manipulation. Though I wish the author could post more chapters, although I'm not rushing him or whatever but I just wanna read more to be honest. also I would like for the author to insert a chapter dedicated to elaborate on the power system of the abilities of the bloodlines and stuff. If ever there is any. But if there aren't any supposedly in the novel then it's also fine. Thank you! Anyways for a first written novel this is really good ✨😊 Hope the author doesn't stop writing.

Story is good. No overpowered characters. Searched this yokai tag and got interested because of the title, gave it a chance to read and it was worth it.

There is a lot of mystery in this book and from chapter 1, it gets you intrigued that you just want to find more of the story. There is room for improvement overall but the story is nice. Looking forward to more.

This Alucard is sooo cool, dude! 1000/10

First of all,this is good for someone who like a casual reading.What i love the most is how the author making the story from casual to "twist" I read both of this author book,and I like how his story were.Not too much excess detail that "unessesary".Giving the reader full access on their own imagination.I also love how simple his writing.Hope the best for this author.Keep up the good work.

surprisingly pretty good. story flows decently well, characters feel like they have their own personality and it's interesting enough. also love the fact the privilege chapter prices are what they are. as most stories charge 50$ for 25 chapters which are only 1k words. the fact you get 50 for 10 is what i think all privilege prices should be. Keep it up author

This is an action packed story with interesting characters and developments. I look forward to seeing how the story grows over time. It is definitely worth a read, and will catch your attention quickly.

Everything is good, but you're forgetting one thing... bees can produce própolis.

Shamelessly rating my book 5😂🥲I have to love my work as much as other people do😅This book is amazing and the FL reminds me so much of myself in a weird way.Don't forget we're in WSA. Every form of support is highly appreciated❤

Needs a better fandom fr bruhh is goated and why is review 140 words well We need more bruhh So when are we going to see Eli jaren and Clara again Broo just shut them off after giving them a nice beginning