Dark Mage's Ascension

I was captured in the first chapter

Too similar to Astral Pet Store but I didn't mind it. One thing that bothers me though is he neglects his family too much and relies on plot armor to keep them safe. He could have done a lot more to make them stronger but let's them get taken away because he is too cautious when technically his employees and pets can overpower anyone. Author can just write no harm will befall the mom and sister until his dad is strong enough to help free them but any filial son will not take the risk.

've read this story up till the end. I've gotta say, it's good. it's a top tier webnovel story, and worth a read. it's about an mc trying reach the top of a virtual world with an undead legion. the mc starts from nothing, and manages to reach great heights, but it's all due to his efforts (and some luck, of course). he didn't gain some stupid generic system or hidden powers.he also does not act or feel like a soreborn loser, and there are not harems of course. not only this is a game that feels real, it being just a facet of a virtual reality doesn't mean it'll be less... it manages not to disconnect with the real world and keep it's edge at the same time. unlike some other novels with virtual reality themes that makes reality part seems like a different story, and an unpleasant wake up call from a pleasant dream and another competently written story. the reality part manages to complement everything without ruining it even remotely. the combat is exciting and well written. it being on a virtual world doesn't mean it's not exhilarating at all. since the character would lose almost all of his potential benefits on a single loss... the author somehow also manages to make almost every battle a 'stake it all' fight. which is amazingly competent. as for the characters, they are interesting at least. yes, it's good. yes, you should read it.Now

The story seems to be good as of yet, the spelling errors are unrecognizable to my overly sensitive to errors brain. And the nice added in comedy is a nice touch. Overall the book is really good!

So um, I don't know if I wanna walk any further into the novel. Since I don't wanna be immersed than suddenly get hit by yaoi romance. I'm no homophobe. But its just not my preference.

Author Note: I am writing as a hobby but I tried to do things professionally. Although I need to work on my grammar more, my story is still readable and written in detail. I rate my review Writing Quality 3 stars because it is only average writing quality with quite a lot grammar mistakes. However, if I'm a person that just curing from dyslexia could read the novel without much difficulty, I'm sure other won't have it hard to read the story either.My grammar needs improvement but I don’t have a teacher to teach me, so I don’t mind it if you rate me badly because of my grammar since I understand that it’s important for the reader to read the novel. Just don’t expect for it to get any better if you don’t plan on helping me. Like I say, I don’t have a teacher to teach me grammar. I couldn’t see the mistake when I’m writing and re-reading so, you cannot hope for too much. Stability of Updates, I must rate it 5 stars because 1 chapter a day and if there are a lot chapters in stock I will update 2-5 chapter on Sunday or sometimes on Saturday too. Its depend on my mood, really but it can never be lower than one chapter a day. So, I must say that it is as stable as translator translating an available novel.Story Development 4 stars. Don't ask me why. I just liked how my story is developing. Why it lack one more star? Because it is not quite detail enough unlike professional novels.Character design 4 stars. I love my characters, naturally 4 stars. Why it lack one more star? Similar to the above, it is not quite detail enough but in the future, I will improve on this surely.World Background 4 Stars. No reason, just 4 stars.Source of inspiration: Library of Heaven Path, History's Number 1 Founder, Tales of Demons and GodsDisclaimer: I don't have the basic knowledge of Xianxia so do forgive me for that. I only know Xianxia from reading novels so my knowledge can be lacking. However, it is a certain that this novel is more of Xuanhuan than Xianxia. That novel cover, I owned it. I'm the one that created it.Warning: It is Yaoi. If you don’t like Yaoi, you can still read because I think that some Xianxia and Xuanhuan have acceptable BL moment too. If there is NSFW scene I will warn beforehand. There will be a rate for Yaoi moment. One star to five stars. If it is too explicit, I will rate it five stars, if it just both men being naked but did nothing, I will rate it one star. If you hate Yaoi, then please, I’m politely escorting you out of my novel. Don’t ruin the review just because you hate Yaoi.You may ask whatever you want to ask in this review but make sure to be polite to everyone.

Although the grammar is not food it has a good plot and great character

I cleared my throat whilst making awkward and threatening eye contact with The Un-unnaive Girl.