Nice and intriguing. The story has great potential. Kudos Author

I love the character of Anna, and her going into the VR world, and it was a fun read. I enjoyed it, and I think it deserves 5/5 stars for the plot.

Author nailed at the atmosphere.System hasn't been explained yet.I felt natural part of process, adventure.From the fifth chapter onwards the novels tools off l.Expecting high tension chapters with system.

If you want to enjoy system novel with female style of writing this is the best. I love the writing. Gee gee is so good at this. Keep doing it!

Amazing it’s the first story were it feels like it could actually happen . Every part of it is feels real the story has allot of potential and the author is using it in a creative way And the more you read the more you see it’s uniqueness i am sure that any experienced reader will be happily surprised. If there is any changes I will updated the review in the comments

Good day my friend.  It's really an intriguing storytelling.  But you are delaying Samsons arrival, I want to see how he deals with those people.

So, I’m on Chapter 4, and I just have to say that when it comes to writing descriptions and certain scenes, this book is good.However, in terms of storyline and pacing, I find myself a bit confused. Like, did Stark wake up in another world, time, or place? Did he transmigrate in Chapter 1, or was it just a dream before he ended up in the circus?That’s my only concern, but overall, I’m enjoying the mystery of the story, the characters in the circus, and the journey!

Wow I wonder it to happen in my life so good damn nice and loved your Imagination 💗✨God bless your writings and also excited for next parts too 😍😍😍

I love the pacing and structure of the novel—it flows smoothly and keeps me engaged. The attention to detail is impressive, making the world feel immersive. It’s a strong start with great potential for even more growth. Keep up the amazing work, author!

It's a good example of how to develop a system novel. The writer did a good job with opening and throughing the mc right into the action but also adding meaning to it. The way the world was explained was logical and made sense, and it wasn't overwhelming it was simple and to the point. Great story overall and ill be adding it to my library's

I love the way you write their is something I like about the way you build up your story I never expect I will see such a unique novel about west Africa on webnovel.

We could do better if not best 🙂 .I recommend