Eternal Undying Chronicles

I would like to preface this review by saying I thoroughly enjoyed the story. I would definitely recommend it to someone. I just think there is a minor issue that keep it from earning a five star rating.The first issue is not one that limits the story from being rated five stars. I have read up to chapter 220 and this issue was a recent occurrence. The author stopped including the main character status page after he leaves the beginner village. I have not seen the main character’s stats or the stats  of his summons for at least 30 chapters and it is a little bit frustrating. The status page was the main way that the author showed the main characters progress in the story. But, although it seems that the author is limiting the usage of the status in the soul book, it is not a dealbreaker. I can live with it.The main issue that I feel limits the story from being five stars is the interaction between the main character, female lead, and slime. Iris, the female lead, is a beast tamer. She has raised a few beasts in the past. Apparently, treating the beast like a child is the best way to raise them because that is what she does.The other reasoning the author gave for the interaction with the slime is that it is family.  I understand the justification that the slime is family, not a tool or pet, but that doesn’t mean it has to be treated like a baby. when the slime is kissed on the cheek every single chapter it’s pretty annoying. Also, the slime kisses the characters on the cheek every single chapter. Obviously, I am over exaggerating. But, when reading the story it feels as if that is the case. It got on my nerves a lot when I read the story. I understand that we treat our pets in a similar manner, but it was really cringeworthy when reading. Furthermore, the slime calls the main character papa and the female lead mama which is also very annoying. I’m pretty sure this novel has an R 18 tag, and these interactions make the story seem childish. It was frustrating to read in those moments to say the least.Overall, as I said in the beginning, I would still recommend this novel. Despite the minor issues, it kept me engaged throughout the story which is not something that happens with a lot of these web novels. I would definitely give it a try and see if you like it!

Soooooo are you dropping this or what? Give us an update TL. Soooooo are you dropping this or what? Give us an update TL. Soooooo are you dropping this or what? Give us an update TL.

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Very good for now, just hoping he won't become the cliche beta male. For now it doesn't seem like it, even though the author coincidentally managed to kill both of the guys from the other group lol.Waiting eagerly to see more!

Ive read 47 chapters so far. This story is pretty entertaining. However my biggest issue is the lack of detail.. especially involving sexual things between the MC and the witches. Its simply a waste of potential. Its not enjoyable. Just a bunch of hints at what they are doing instead of giving the readers juicy scenes. Kind of lame.

Sooo this one has been on my recommendation list for a long time. I was bored reading cultivation novel, and this one has a female lead with a touch of romance so it piqued my curiosity. Let me review it so far (chapter 102):Translation quality is...well, I guess acceptable, with mistakes here and there. Actually I'm not a native english myself, so I don't usually naggy about grammatical mistake as long as it isn't too horrendous and I get the overall meaning. But the mistakes I found make me dizzy. At some point the translation said "she" and sudeenly turned to "he" when referring to same person. What the hell? So did she get found out cross dressing or not? And worse, it got repeated over and over again. I gave up trying to understand.As for updating stability, I'm not really sure cuz I just joined the ride and binge read this at once. Hope it's following the promised released rate, as to give a reason why the quality is at times barely acceptabe,or else I might feel really disappointed.Story development is not really good. The pace is jumping from quick to sloow as hell and then take a sudden thrust, then it slowed again just to accelerate. Some events got a really detailed explanation, some just mentioned on passing, few sweeped out, and even there's some event I couldn't fugure out what the **** exactly happened. Really, the element of surprise is so strong in this one.Character design is not so bad, but not good either. The male lead makes me curious and hidden in mystery (as far as I read). Actually that was the main reason I insist to continue reading. The female lead transformation is too steep, and her skill as assassin is too damn high. The worst thing about her is I dont have a clue about her previous life's world. Was she an esper? What the heck with that over 9000 teleport ability? So fucking no clue!As for other characters, they seemed bland. And idiot. And too gullible. And inconsistent. 🙄Her father is...weird. He acted not caring at beginning, and suddenly turned into pampering caring daddy for some reason I cannot accept. Too. Damn. Fast. Female lead is awesome at transforming people around her.The antagonists are too wicked, brainless, cocky, and other usual troves you found in antagonistics character of soap operas. They shows their ugly sides plainly, no smart scheming, no fun or interesting twist, just plainly wicked. Hope this one getting better in later chapters.As I said before, world background is mystery. Not much explanation about her current world (besides kingdom and clan stuffs, others only mentioned in short passing), or the previous one. Really, when you said a modern human world, my imagination assumed that it was our current world on Earth. Maybe a little bit in future, but not a world with espers, or exorcist, or other superpower beings. Just couldn't imagine this right. Maybe mine is too bland, or too realistic to say.A bit over 100 chapters and the world explained are only the basics one, her family, her kingdom, a bit of clans, a very slight information about male lead.But you know what grind my gears the most? Its the FUCKING FOOT NOTES THAT PLAINLY SPILL THE SPOILERS OH MY GAWDD!! Dear translator, please don't do things outside your job of translating the story. To sum it up, I probably will stop for now. I'm too stupified with the development that turned so sharp and made it more unacceptable. Hoping some news that this story got better by other diligent readers. I'll just put this on the side to collect some dust and new chapters. See you then.

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