Chapter 1 is so disconnected and disjointed from the rest of the chapters.I can't figure out the anything after chapter 1 so maybe create a natural flow 💜

Impressive story, I love the fact that the systems and terminologies are so different and unique allowing you to immerse fully in a brand new world.

love it, enjoy it, keep up the good work, you have a very good writing quality

I'm not usually a fan of female leads, but your story is interesting in its own way. Worth a try.

are you gonna drop it or go through the very end of it ? (cuz I really be hate it when a author drops their work half way)

This is my first bl story so can't compare too much but loving the way this story is developing so far. I can't wait to keep reading this one!

Great novel really love it can't wait to see more from how the story unfolds can't wait hope the author doesn't drop this............ ............

While a familiar start of betrayal and rebirth, the story and characters make this a fantastic and unique read. I love the world building, slowly filling in and expanding, not like some that Info dump. Each character feels like a real person with their own quirks. I'd highly recommend.

Hi author Anna i love❤️❤️❤️ reading all your  novels and I'm very happy to read dis one too🤗🤗🤗 keep on updating plsssss and write other book like dragons elves

Curse you Mars! Now I have to read this fan made story!Oh um, great story so far by the way. It not everyday that you would see a novel that is fan made that actually stay close to the actual novel in term of pacing and character personality.

I’m the author and I think I’m pretty aight.

I love reading story on transmigration or if it's about 'stuck inside a game'. The title was interesting so I came here. The Explanation is smooth as well. It's a good story at least from what I've read till now.