The Wandering Star

highly recommended! ...

Fellow Pinoy here! Anyway, I've only read a few chapters, but here's my review on it. Things to improve:First off, there is an obvious approach to action and since it's a zombie novel, it is a must to have action-filled chapters. However, although the author does try to execute this, it can fall flat. Maybe it's because there's not much the readers know about Nile himself, or what even drives him. If it is simply for survival, then the narratives and descriptive words should be improved on more to elicit the right emotions.Good points:The author knows where the story is supposed to go, and Nile's actions are logical. It's also interesting to know there are "interesting zombies

Weak world building.Lots of cliches.The MC's motivation is a travesty.Supposedly motivated by making money in the game, but he has never once actually tried to figure out making money.Has a part time job and that's supposed to support him and his 'non-biological sister' (yes... another sister not related by blood)He doesn't seem to have any angst over this once he starts playing, it's just tossed to the side as more women line up around the MC.Yes...it's another one of those where women are almost always good and men (aside from possibly the elderly and maybe little kids) are BAD.If it is going to be a harem then the author really needs to put that tag.Someone mentioned how the rules of this 'game' that had only been in existence for 4 years were being used on a MEDICAL EXAM?Yes you have to give the author room but you can't expect us to throw away our brains completely, you need to give a realistic reason or it is just not going to work.Works at a brick and mortar convenience store....that specializes in this virtual reality game? Doesn't seem to make a lot of sense unless it's just for marketing purposes I guess.You can expect to have to suspend your disbelief on a fantasy novel, but the logic still needs to be there.

The current story is extremely slow, it’s been 20 chaps and the main character still doesn’t get what his power actually is.The translating quality is surprisingly good for most of it makes sense,the story development is somewhat predictable, of course it’s still is somewhat random but currently 50/50.World building is generic, the author doesn’t even try to make it unique in terms of the world building so far.

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"Put your dirty noses in somebody else's business. Got that?" You scowled at them

She was too rusty.

Jack's attacks and strength were beginning to slow down and fade away giving the Blue Ants more opportunities to attack.