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DeathSimulation
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- July 1,2024
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Author Here!!!I hope you enjoyed the story so far, if you found any problem you can comment in this review. If possible I will try to fix that issue.Also if you like the story please do leave a review and give some power stones.
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So this is more Netori The MC is the one taking other guys waifus and cucking people, but he isnβt getting cucked by anybody right?
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hope you guys enjoy this novel and You can review it and comment and tell me anything an ask any question and Tell me what i did wrong and what to do
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Your novel has a great start, it also has a strong emotional depth and an engaging premise. Overall, it's a promising concept and has the potential to be a gripping romance if it carefully balances character depth, suspense, and emotional stakes. Keep up, the wonderful work, author!
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Ok at first glance this story is dupe, if you can get a contract and keep going, I would love to see how a mushroom climbs up the ranking, like π
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The plot is peak so far. MC is likeable enough not annoying like most other MCs. Iβm hoping he gets more power ups soon I can see him becoming really strong. The villains are great and very well written. Really liking it as of now Iβll give it a 5/5.
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Please give me more, I wait every day for new chapters! I check at least several times a day lol! Keep up the good writing!
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Keep it up author Weldone ππππππππππsarangayor πππππππππππππππΉππΉππΉππΉπππππΉππΉ
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Systems and Sex - if that's what you're looking for, you found it :DOn a serious note, the writing is clear and easy to follow, with a nice flow. System elements are a little heavy for my personal tastes, but appropriate for a litrpg. It feels like the MC is always down for some void sex (several sexualized encounters as of chapter 20) so I would consider that to be a primary facet/draw for readers. It takes a while for other characters to be introduced, but the story starts to open up more around ch18. The world is well-fleshed out and action scenes are easy to envision.
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Guys when I say the author is a master of crafting a scene with descriptive language, I truely do mean it. The world and characters are also just really well paced; not too fast for you to digest. This story reminds me a bit of berserk and frieren. Just a good vibe with well balanced action as well as slice of life dialogue banter moments. Keep it up author! Amazing work.
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I'm loving this story, please don't stop.
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Was waiting for a psychological story and it's pretty good,currently waiting for next chapter overall I see a good character development and ya only time will say now
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