Good novelKeeps the reader on the edge.Nobody saw the Vael dying on the fifth chapter.System feels natural part of the story instead of over explanation.

Hehe. I don't knowBut this is good one.Bye

The story has a powerful hook right from the start, appealing to every fictional reader. Kudos to the writer for this beautiful piece. The use of names for characters is also in alignment with the story's theme.

A remarkable novel with carefully crafted and diverse settings. The descriptions are strong, and the dialogues are quite engaging, though they could benefit from a little more depth at times. Overall, it's a well-above-average read that captivates the reader.

Dark, thrilling and suspenseful. The author also does deliver a compelling narrative.The characters are diverse and relatable, from slicia, Rolland and leo.Also the author has done well with the world building , which I must applaud. Awaiting more chapters!

The first couple of chapter seem interesting so far. so keep up the good work

Hey there, Authore here.This is my first webnovel and I plan to see where it takes me. As I see where this goes, I plan to to everyones feedback to make better chapters as we move forward.If you have any questions ask below...

I can literally smell that it's gonna be Top tier!please keep going!

A very well written novel. Only 9 chapters so far but a good start.

ceritanya bagus , saya merekomendasikan untuk dibaca

The start of the story and the sorority house arc hooked me up...Imma read it and see how it goes further. Loved that neighbour aunty as well..sensing some steamy scenes with her ahead...Keep it up!!!!

pretty good for a first start, author pretty much improved with all the suggestions previously given in their old book