The Marshals Want to Get Divorced

This novel is stupid. Everything seems more Asian than American even though it's based in America. Lots of inconsistencies. The ending was too abrupt. it just ended with "He got a First class merit but no one knew because it was confidential." ??? what kind of ending was that? they just rounded up an entire arc in TWO paragraphs and said "ya we done with this story".???? Problems with this story are listed here.1) Asian culture in an American setting. eg. Calling people aunts and uncles and also calling others brother or sister (Americans just call people-besides parents and grandparents- by their names regardless of age) Also, terms like Qi etc were used often.2) Repetition 3) There's no flow. No connection between different arcs.4) the balance of gaining points or rewards is tilted. MC did nothing besides reading and all reading materials was provided on a silver platter (including confidential info)5) Everyone just trusted him without hesitation for no actual reason. He just said "Believe me." and they'd just do. 5) The anti gravity arc was simply just cut out. the majority of the book was of him "reaching for the stars". Instead of working on it after making a whole research laboratory, he just did some side quests and the book ended.6) What about Atlantis??? there was a whole civilization dying there and you just left for the side quests. Was making a submarine so important? Just to showoff to the Russians? 7) MC has no remorse. He just bombed a whole area in Mexico. 8) Lots of white supremacy and unfounded nationalism. After all that happened IRL to America, (BLM, police aggression, etc) this whole book just triggered me. 9) Terrible writing and grammar. Why so many exclamation marks?10) I don't even know what the MC looks like. I read the entire book and no mention of his eye or hair colour.11) Time periods was unrealistic. it takes time to draft up something whether digitally or by hand (at least a week or more) yet he just finished building a whole new working submarine in 2 weeks and also got it tested and all. (bro. who is the one designing and labelling the stuff? -_-) 12) He just forgets people he made promises to. What happened to that guy who found his talent? His friends? Mavis or whatever her name was? what about the researchers in the labs? Those professors he poached? I'm done writing .

This is really a top tier book so far.I didnt notice any sort of bad writing quality, but I am also not particulary picky. Since there are only 19 chapters out atm, I cant really judge, but what I can say is, that the chapters are all VERY long. I really love that. They also dont feel stuffed or as if he tries to reach some wordcount, so I am happy. Cant say much about the story yet, but so far its very solid. However, my only negative point with this is that there will be no romance according to the tags, which is actually a shame. I dont need a harem or anything, but a book is just not 5 Stars without romance. Maybe Author can be persuaded to add a romance of some sort? Character design seems solid, they dont all have the same personality and seem to have realistic motivations and stuff. The world background is very nice. I like the whole setting and the explaining of the world is certainly not dry. Some parts about the world are unclear yet, but I assume that the MC will find out or reveal it later in the story. So, all in all, seems like a solid story so far. But for the love of god, PLEASE add romance. Doesnt have to be fanatic or smth, just some playful banter and stuff with a gf so he wont be lonely at the top.

I expect very little but,  at the very least, it sounds interesting so that's good.@*adddddhdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjddjdjdjdjddjdjddjdddjddjdjdjdjdj

I don't think I've given another book 5 stars yet, but this gets it. The story is  a gritty and very real depiction of what it's like to be at the bottom with a desire to escape.The first arc hit hard. Like really hard. It's obviously a made up story, but the emotions in it feel raw and visceral.I wouldn't change anything about this novel. There's no need to change the writing at all, because perfection is not necessary here. If anything, any writing issues just give the novel more character.Truly a fantastic novel, and I will be following it from now on. Well done to the author.

This story does have potential. But there are some problems that I find. If the author reads these hopefully he can answer some of my question that I have. For the record I am caught up to the latest chapter and will continue  reading for sure. For the Writing Quality theres alot of grammatical errors and misspelled words that do need to be fixed. English might not be their first language and that's totally cool but theres alot that need to be updated. Story Development is interesting  but it feels like a train with no brakes. Very fast paced. This isn't a bad thing but keep in mind that your Character Development bbn and World Building could suffer from the pace your setting. You arent even 100 Chapters in and it feels like he already God level. I believe the story would benefit  more if there more time spent on him training his and other powers so we understand everyone's power level. This goes hand in hand with Character Design. Everyone feels flat. Secrecy is good but we know next to nothing about the MCs friend or Best Friend. Nor do we know why William is the way he is. Emma seems to be the classic soft hearted healer. She, in my opinion could be more of a personality   or just different. Alice is also very flat so far. Is she suppose to be a companion? is she just a glorified assistant? I have a feeling that she could be so much more, such as taking the initiative and using her animal forms. The MC himself also need a bit more design. Especially when is comes to his background and the World background in general. What happened to his parents and family? What is his motivation to obtain power? What about him makes him be worthy to obtain a Pure Soul? Not to mention this Acedemy. Is it special? How is the MC able to go to a Acedemy even though hes an orphan? The back ground need a lot more fleshing out. Such as the the Countries on Earth. What is the Federation? What's the big deal about the 5 Great Families? What's society and the Government like? What role does the Association play in the Government? Where is the setting of the story? US? Europe? Asia? Or because of how the Calamities changed the landscape, is there even any old Governments left? I feel like so far that the story is sprinting on and not pausing the look at the scenery.

Please release this on Christmas please please........ It'll be an amazing Christmas gift. I hope you guys release this I have been waiting for a long time for this novel. It's really amazing. I cannot wait please. Thanks

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