Heartbeats In The Pool

reviewing for the event to get a fast pass

I just started this book and I'd like to beg you author...please don't screw this up, with those kinds of abilities, the MC should be a cold and cunning villian,or someone who priorities power over relations..he can have relationships but it shouldn't limit him...anything less will just be a wasted ability on him

The author fid a great job making situation funny without the cringe aspect one of the top novels i have read

I haven't really read much of the story but the rate at which it's growing would any newbie author's eye, just like it did with me. However may I ask why the author hasn't been uploading?

I just love this novel, it is a very impressive novel with minimal mistakes in English. Most novels I see have a very terrible English but not this novel. It's English is far better than most novels.

Its a good book                                                                                                                              

"Sasha, Doko, Lily and Shito... We haven't trusted you in the times we should have. Rather, we caused you more pain and suffering. We were wrong the whole time. Will you ever forgive us?"

"Hmmm?"