Heartbeats In The Pool

It's turning out to be something great. I really like the setup of the whole world and the characters also seem great and sophisticated. Keep it up Author-san....😎

Characters are boring, dialogue is terrible and the grammar is even worse. Whenever he starts writing in all caps to make the MC sound angry (i think? only reason i could think of) it just looks terribly cringe and edgy. Had potential, but all characters are so bland that its like eating good looking food that has absolutely no spice or taste.

The novel is... OK?The starting was quite fantastic and the ideas are quite good.The main problem here is why would author post useless chapters without any contents? Asking readers to read somewhere on another platform? I really hate it. There is only 'The chapters 1 to 25 or 26 to 50 are posted on Bla Bla Bla' made me mad!Why would you post chapters here? I feel like that you are using this platform as an advertisement for gathering readers.Note: I have read only first 45 chapters only.Now comes the review about story. The problem in this novel is:The main problem here is every'thing' distains MC. For god's sake, he's someone from a huge background but from the very start, even the mobs and side characters are showing distain and I'll intent toward MC as if he's a beggar and useless person.Evey single place, Every single event, MC is distained by people and MC and his supporters do not do a thing or don't even know a thing.My head hurts while reading such novels! Why would you write something like that? Is MC a mascot? Is MC a goody guy who spares everyone? I can't say...The background is very confusing. Is he someone with strong background? or is he from a normal/mid level background? Everyone distains him and makes me confused.Then the world background is also very confusing. What are the ranks of Aristocrasts? One guy says he's from Gu or whatever empire he is and show distain to MC and it turned out that he have a weak background. He was acting so arrogant that I felt that he had same background as MC. It's so bad that it started to kill my remaining brain cells.The chapters are messed. Some chapters are available on one site, while some are only available on other sites. It's so troublesome that I had to switch 3 different platforms to get a good amount of chapters to read.

Nice story, can’t wait for more chapters.I really enjoyed reading from chapter one! One of the best thing so far, no filler, mc not a idiot, not too over powering but I think he will become overpowered!

A very unique approach to storytelling with a nice personal touch. The author has seamlessly blended politics with history and created a realistic and gritty world.

Fucking chapter 12 There was two story that got bad at one chapter in one daXoxoxoxo love interest in a a good chance of getting to the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time last year I had a great day at the same time

Love the OP MC, still have grammar mistakes, need daily updates,author-san post more chapters please..................................................................140.....................................................................

Finally back, I thought you dropped the novel, came back better in every aspect, keep it going!!now gotta fill with random words, good novel tho ;)