nice story, but i want it to be more like manga                                                                                                               

This novel delivers a high-speed, action-heavy story with just the right touch of romance—without falling into the usual harem tropes. The pacing keeps the reader engaged, throwing them into intense battles, strategic planning, and gripping conflicts that unfold across different perspectives.One of the standout features is the multiple POVs, offering insight into various characters' thoughts, motivations, and struggles. It adds depth to the world and makes the stakes feel real. The romance is present but doesn’t overshadow the core action, keeping it balanced without unnecessary drama.If you enjoy fast storytelling with fluid transitions, diverse character viewpoints, and a strong focus on action, this is a novel worth picking up.

very good assh puttar give it up very good writing story me becoming you are very big fan your story good good lovely total I can't stop laughing so nice story can't stop laughing very funny stories lovely where you lovely and

This story definitely has some potential.You should make the world building more mysterious and don't info dump. The world should unravel slowly

nice story, but i want it to be more like manga                                                                                                               

This is unrelated to part 2, which is flawed. I have made a choice to redo the story, but retain the same characters.this will be a much slower paced story, with characters who grow over time

This is peak fiction. It has all of the elements required to make the story a masterpiece. Zeke and sister's interaction is well written and it's expressed by author in a great way

not much to say this is kinda good no cap

A strong start that instantly hooked me, with great potential to reach even greater heights. An engaging novel that I highly recommend giving a try.

Traditional five star review from the author.Welcome to my Biocore World. Share your opinions and Comments, helps me find the right direction for my writing.Thanks.

Hello all, it's the author of the fallen kingdom. I want to first thank you all for the support! I felt like it was time to write something for you all and answer questions that may be asked.  Despite being at 10 chapters at the point of writing this, I would like to keep it as a journal and as a promise to you current readers and to my future readers. I have been planning this story for a few years at this points, doing some 'rps' with my friend who has helped me a considerable amount through my journey allowing me to flesh characters out, explore different themes and solidify the concept I want to follow, so for the next few years I will do my best to impress you all and really make you all apart of the story.What was your inspiration for beginning to write? I felt as if it was something I had always aspired to do. My minds been create for quite a while, ever since I was a child I always enjoyed a creative side to things - my first instance being drawing, till eventually I realised in school I was quite good at english without trying too much and by consuming media I wanted something that I could provide to people, a world where they felt immersed, where characters felt real and an escape.How many chapters will TFK have? If I am consistent all throughout the story at roughly 2.5k words each chapter, I think I can easily get TFK to 700-1000 chapters that will be comprised into 15-20 arcs. Will your writing consistency change? Well I haven't thought about that at this point, if the story gets even more popular to a point it could sustain income, I would love to make this my full time job, but even if I can't I would still be glad to keep on writing as this is my passion. I will usually stick to around 4-5 chapters per week, but I am still in school so my writing consistency may slow down because of my important exams.Tell us about Xerxes Draedon? Xerxes was someone tired of being punished for being weak, he watched idly as devastation consumed him, whether he was too slow to reach the people he loved, or too weak to be strong enough to save them. He knew it just wasn't something he wanted anymore but something he needed, and that strength had begin to make the established society to question him and his decisions that are in place to protect everyone.What's your favourite aspect of the story? This is quite a hard question, whilst I love my character-believing they are the foundation of making a story, I know that the history I have planned is definitely enticing and brings the plot from then to now together, the past and the present playing hand in hand to shape the future.What are the biggest themes in your story? Definitely identity, Identity was something I didn't even know was the idea of what I wanted the message to be, but I want to explore different themes and plots for different characters: Identity, redemption, hope, chaos, hatred, ego and all that other good stuff.Perspective swaps and how are you going to do them? I will definitely incorporate many different perspectives into the story. As I said earlier characters are the foundation of the story, and even though it is Xerxes' story, the others in the story equally play a part.Artwork? As for artwork, I have pieces coming together and as the story grows I will definitely have artwork being key and potentially when the story reaches a secret milestone, I can start considering a webcomic for TFK!5 stars? 5 stars is what I have envisioned for the story, even though it may not be 5*'s right now, I know the story will achieve that and I will convince everyone of how great my writing and story can be. So thank you all for being here!

Author why not uploading for so many days don't abandoned it