StarWars: Into Darkness

You have written a very good book, but I wish you could release more than one chapter at a time.

I get that you can write whatever you want, but it's really necessary to abord religions stuff? Why go to a road that really offends the largest religion worldwide? I'm so disappointed I lost my time. Please, put a tag and warn that your story is biased against Christians or other religions (I don't know because I've stopped at chapter 25)

For all the chapters I have read, I could not understand, in the tags is a romance, it means there will be a romantic line, but will it be a harem? Author, could you please tell me.

Engaging, intruiging, different, amazing. Diversity of characters, the misty mysterious plot that makes you clinch for the next chapter, and already showing character development are just a few of many things to be said about this one. Can't wait for the rest.

Lots of standard cliches, however the book is still very engaging and fun to read. I 100% recommend this book to anyone that has a love for magic.

It was great.                                                                                                                              

"Grandpa, you're awake. Do you need anything?" he asked

And didn't she promise to not embarrass herself and avoid displaying a single mistake awhile ago? Then she would fulfill that promise until the very end despite whatever circumstances that may arise.