The story is good, specially the first 5 chaps so far. also the world background and characters are also amazing with there being hell and Lucifer and stuff and of course the system also🔥 But I guess the grammar needs a bit more polishing, but doesn’t really affect much in the story😊 So I’ll give it a 4.8 hehe

Gu and the kids are going to the young man

As I said earlier, this is one of the finest writings. The writing quality is very good and the flow is very natural, I appreciate the author for his explanation in the author's thoughts section about the terms used in the novel. The world background, character designing  and story development is good. Overall, it's a very good novel, which has lots of potential in it. Keep up the good work author

A few chapter in and its a great book so far. Love the description and characters. Kudos to you author😍

After reading Chapter 25:I hope you remove the #dark and #villain tags because they do not express the novel even a little. The novel is about reincarnation and a good hero who gives his friends all his work and is also not selfish. I personally entered the novel because of the villain tag and I did not find even an atom of evil in the MC, so I hope you remove them and stop deceiving us.😡

I like it, its a nice change of pace from the cliche Villan novels. Where they just add romance for no reason.Its got a generic world building tho,I recomend that you dont take as much inspiration from other works. As you did with your other novel.Otherwise looks good

The story is very captivating and well-written, I loved the ending of chapter 4. The way everything was set up, it gave me chills and so much more.

It's not a bad novel, and I'm wondering will in the future, the MC will be staying as a wolf and never able to have a humanoid form?

If you have a pet, can you be a snake turtle or what was that animal? It was part of the four Chinese animals you know the Chinese animals that white tiger dragon Phoenix it was like a combine of a turtle and a snake and wrapped around that turtle shell if you guys a pet make sure he has that one.

interesting story and enjoyable experience. don't wait to read more

Heyo people. This is the author here. This is the first novel that I have written on here. In all honesty, I have no idea what schedule i will be posting, so yeah. If you find mistakes, please put them in the comments next to the paragraph. I will try to fix them when I get to them. Also, if you have suggestions, I am all ears, just once again put them in the comments. Now I hope you all have a wonderful rest of your day. From your truly: The author

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