nice and well done live long life and give us more  story like this

hola people, this book is like about friends fighting each other. By hte way if story changes forgive me because for now only 1 chapter is there which I read. thank you

so far one of the best reads, hope the author will continue writing. has a great potential, from the world building and character development not be the best but one of the greats.

Honestly, This a pretty good read, I am extremely dyslexic and I learned how to read just to read this. After the 7th chapter my failure to get an erection was solved, a story has never made me more excited than this. - Meganut Kingdom

A gripping story with deep worldbuilding and high stakes. The tension is constant, the mystery intriguing, and the protagonist’s struggle feels real. Definitely worth reading!

What can I say, the moment I saw that titles it's clear what I was getting myself into.Its a good read so far.

With some world building and charcter design it can be improved. with this speed of story progression it feels more like Ai generated.

The author fid a great job making situation funny without the cringe aspect one of the top novels i have read

Am not going to say much but the novel is as good as it name 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

this way too good, coffee and zombie, barista and buildinh

So I thought I would throw this in here as a little questions page.• I make daily updates on this book. Sometimes it will be two chapters one day, sometimes it will be only one 1500 chapter that day.• Main characters name is pronounced AIR-em • I am also going through and editing all of the previous chapters that are currently out. I’m still a learning wither so every time I learn something new, I apply it.• If you decide to read this book as I write it you can watch the story grow or something.Thank you for reading this! Hope you enjoy my book!

Really good read so far! The thing that stands out most for me in this book is the dialogue. The character designs are nice and all, but the dialogue is really fleshing out our characters, like Soujin, who is surprisingly spirited and driven and a little snarky, or Muffet, who threw me for a loop with her whole 'interaction' with Captain Blackhart. You get a feel of the fact that these characters are more than meets the eye.The action is good so far and I appreciate the immediate dive into Sword Magic and Mystcry. I hope the fact that Soujin is starting as a Captain won't hamper how we perceive power progression in the story (if that is something the author intends to explore).All in all great read