World building good, flaw is good, pacing a bit slow at first but still can savor, the character building good; however, the book itself is still ongoing, I need to see further how  it will go. Pacing, great overall is good. A little tweaks on a grammar, and a bit cleansing to the unccessary words in dialogue and paragraph, all will be smooth to go. The story itself is interesting, the start was a very simple yet full of life, the first character who enter the scene, relate me much immediately, 😂😉overall, I highly recommend this story.

Really captivating ,I can't wait to unravel more from blood Hounds

Excellent 👌🏾 very Captivating in truly curious about what happens when you gain all that power 💁🏾u200d♀️you could either have control or be mad 😂

I love it but I don't know if my viewers like it so if you find any errors or any mistakes can you please help me out

This story seems to catch your attention pretty quickly and leaves you wanting to read more! I can’t wait for more chapters to be out and see what will happen to the main character. The story and theme is quite interesting and engaging, and I am really enjoying the way the author is narrating the point of view of the main character from unusual perspectives we do not often get to read in books. Definitely a good read

at first glance the cover kinda reminds me of song of achilles, historical yaoi gimme also, i'd love to discuss more about your book, is there contacts (ig, email, or discord) i could follow? xx

So far the book is written well. The character development has been evolving as I read, which I like. The story line has not been drug out, but rolling right along wi the each chapter. It has been an enjoyable reading experience so far.

Enjoying the read. Thanks for writing this novel

Obligatory author review: This novel is centered around creating a fantasy world. It's going to be a lighthearted fantasy story with some interesting developments. Some inspirations include Nebula's civilization and the Civilization game series. I've been working on it for a while, so I hope you enjoy it! If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment!

I mean it’s awspec it’s a guaranteed hit

您提到的作者似乎对更新小说的速度有些不满。在文学界，许多读者都期待作者能定期更新作品，以保持对故事的兴趣和投入。然而，有些作者由于各种原因可能会中断更新，这会让读者感到失望。如果您对某本书的作者更新速度感到不满，可以尝试关注作者的其他作品，或者在其他平台上寻找类似风格的内容。

I’m really enjoying the novel, the way you’ve built the VR world is really interesting. The Grim mark on Airum added a cool touch to the story and made me even more curious about what’s going to happen. The idea of having a game filled with so many mysteries, along with character development, is coming together really well! And most importantly, it’s not just about Airum, it’s also about how he’ll evolve with his friends and within the game. I’m excited to see what’s going to happen in the upcoming chapters! 😸