Rebirth: The Delicate Stepmom in a Period Novel

yesterday i thought i had seen everything, today i saw a fanfic with pay wall.What kind of world are we going to leave for the next generations ...?

I just wanna say: This novel would have been very exciting and pleasant to read if only it focused more on action, adventure, and character development but, oh well, we all have our preferences. If I was younger like 14-17 years old, I think I would, from time to time, like some of the cringe humor in this book. What I like about this book:1. The translation is pretty smooth.2. The premise of the story is something to look forward to though not the first of its kindWhat I don't like in this book: 1. Some translated words are out of context. (Remember, this is a fantasy world and our MC(Jiang Xiao)25yrs old, Transmigrated to the body of Jiang Xiaopi 16yrs old. You'll get what I mean if you decide to read the novel.2. The story is too slow3. The forced humor between the interaction of the MC and his older sister is at first fun, then ok, then uninteresting, to being unbearable. Imagine having a wincest and Yuri vibe from beginning til chapter 60. Even during combat, instead of more movements and combat tactics, you'll encounter more dry cheese moments. 4. The MC feels like not an MC but a side character. Even Xia Yan and his sister feels more important as I read the novel5. MC's character is passive. More like a yes man to me. I can't feel his drive and crave for power at all6. The novel has no depth and goal. Read at your own risk.

I feel that this is a good book but the writing and the speech of the characters is forced

Overal the mc got trans. into a game? i think or another world... he can get vitality points from cutting trees,farming  and upgrade his stats... working under a feudal lord and basicly its a survival/wild life with building novel...similar too forest if i should say..its relaxing and  unique novel ...if you want many action maybe theres but i didnt read that much only till 60 ch... but its good if you want relax and enjoy it

A disappointing and underwhelming read, made worse by the injection of slang hero names being thrown everywhere. Great if you can remember the new names of heroes, terrible if you get confused.

Good translation speed, world building, characterization, plot development...really, Everything is good except the MC.I don’t get why that is.  Side characters are great, but the MC seems to not be tethered at all!  He’s the type of MC that’s selfish, stupid, stubborn and arrogant but genuinely believes that he’s DOING GOOD despite causing world-wide (economic, politic, and social) disasters, misery, and destroying innocent lives all over the place.  A bad sexist hypocrite at his finest.  At this point, I honestly believe that it’s only plot armour that prevents the rest of humanity from banding together and eliminating him before he causes more harm.

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