Strong opening and all, I want to see how far this can go it's really going to be a nice ride

The idea of playing games to heal oneself is a great concept. It's also cinematic. I enjoy reading this book. Keep up the good work, good sir!

I love the character building of this story and it was a big suspense in every chapter. I love this book really and I highly recommend you to read this book.

Bro, the first chapter of your story has emotional depth, and it's hard to judge the entire book based on just that. But I can tell you, you can add a mystery tag if you want. I feel like you should start with Renzo in an emotional way and make it suspenseful if you don't mind.

This chapter is a masterful blend of mystery, tension, and subtle character dynamics. The serene setting of The Source of Tao Wetland Park contrasts beautifully with the underlying unease in Shawn’s interactions with Jolie and Donner. The sudden shift in their demeanor—from cold to warm—creates an intriguing sense of unpredictability, making the reader question their true intentions. The introduction of the Spirit Keys and their connection to the Meta Origin Society adds depth to the story, hinting at a larger, hidden narrative. The moment of the blue light flash is particularly captivating, leaving readers curious about its significance. Overall, this chapter skillfully balances suspense and world-building, keeping the reader hooked and eager for more.

'Threads of Deceit' is a masterfully crafted story that explores the complexities of human nature. Your writing is evocative, and the themes you've tackled are thought-provoking. I'm so proud of you for creating something so compelling.

Bro!!! How did I copy you without even knowing your book exists!!!!😂😅anyhow. It’s not word for people to write similar thoughts but kudos brother, yours seems even more interesting and devastating than mine lol good luck brother 😊

It’s a good story. Regression, 2nd chances, revenge, vr game. Nothing new, but it highly reminds me of Rebirth of the Thief Who Roamed the World and I loved that novel. Ethan is an ok MC, though I do wish the author would make him a tad smarter. A couple of examples are the old man telling him about the coming disaster and that the game is not just a game. The old man tells him things that no one should know esp about his regression and what does Ethan do? Proceed to treat the game like a, well game 😩. Another example is when he was picking the flowers and the old man warned him to leave the area or his real body would die. Of course that means continue picking flowers and explore a place that would literally send him to King Yama 😩🤦🏾u200d♀️Another thing that irks me with this genre in general is the author forgetting gear, skills and their own world rules. Skills come out of nowhere conveniently for “plot,” there’s math involved in skills but I skip those parts bc I have yet to see an author remember or math it right. 🤷🏽u200d♀️What I do like about the novel is the budding romance between Ethan and Lyla. The tag says no sisterhood, but I wouldn’t be surprised if the ice queen chick joins them. I like the guild aspect and the guild battles. Ethan isn’t a complete loner so that’s great. I am looking forward to the game world and the real world coming together. All in all, like most novels, it has it’s flaws but I would recommend it. Good job author. 😁

The novel being inspired by WoW’s druid class is a massive boon for me, as that has always been my favorite class and even in the thousands of novels I’ve checked out, I’ve never seen anything like it.Sadly though, other than that, it’s not really for me. Despite REALLY liking the idea of VRMMO, it always devolves, in my view, to petty things irl, political garbage, and massive guild fights…gone is any sense of adventure or exploration That aside, there are a good bit of shitty men in the novel, and while not disgustingly dark, the casual mention of abusing women did damper my interest in reading the novel. Cheers, I hope the novel continues on happily

Good start. The plot ressembles a bit like a kdrama. l'm looking forward to read more.

I haven't read it yet, but Sloth is a good writer, so i have high expectations

I think the writer is improving his content with every passing chapter , as in the later chapters it's getting more fun to read and you can sense a hope of a feeling through the MCs words , not forced but real , and the technological input is also more Deep not extensive but enough to tell the reader about what is going on .