Wait, How Did My Virtual Girlfriend Cultivate into a Sword Immortal?

The first chap got me hooked! Already added to my library!!

This story is moving fast but content is top notch so reading it will be like wholesome. So read it and enjoy it give support to Author. It has a Good start and till now this story is fabulous but let's see how many chapters Author can make in a week.

A decent concept in the story so far, but every time it gets a bit interesting it gets ruined by an annoying thing. I like the concept of the sword and dual cultivation and his low-key approach to it, but the story and characters are things I dislike. The denseness about making love (seriously?) a servent/low person in the biggest cultivation family doesn't know about it?How quickly does he fall for the sect girl he meets and ends up explaining everything to her, so much for low-key, then there is the rather stupid girl spirit talking about her husband every other line she has... Why is she even there and this gives all the signs I don't want to see in a dual cultivating novel (another dual cultivating MC. ) His naiveness about everything becomes kinda annoying to show a reason for the spirit girl character to be in the book, she is not needed and only makes the story stale, she also makes MC look stupid and lost. Why should he even trust her and listen to her and what is her role in the story? What made me stop was that even the next potential lover would be someone who had already enjoyed being with everyone in the town if not the whole country and will always be interested in finding more. I doubt I will like her either, so while there is an interesting concept here, it does not have interesting characters for me. What I would have been interested in,1- His devil side2- Swords and skills about that and his bloodlines powers etc3- Side character/ lovers who matter to his story (not some other dual cultivations wife and some lady who enjoys being with everyone on town)4- A more solid character development (now he is portrayed as Naive one second (So some of the irrelevant side characters could have a reason for existing) and partially smart/wise when the side characters are not needed)5- A much much better reason for the sect girl to like him and accept him being a devil. 6 - etc...Overall the concept got me interested in the story, but the characters made me dislike it. I would suggest that to new readers, you try reading it yourself to make a decision, but for me, I think I will stop it a third of the way.Writing Quality - 4Stability of Updates - 5Story Development - 3Character Design - 1 World Background - 3The total score - 3.2

This is the first novel i have ever read in which MC is stronger than the system...____________________________________________________________________________

Interesting I have read many books and it looks promising so far. I know your native language is not english but it is bound to improvekeep it up :)

Same old returning from a tragic future story but this one lacks any real content. it's just get loot, beat an enemy, get better loot, beat a stronger enemy, repeat.

Interesting Love your work Recommendable Keep up the good work Author

The author has quite the imagination and thus, can creates a lot of different plots, settings and characters. Each of her stories reflect a will to make bew universes to explore. Dialogues could be better, but she already know how to make characters interract efficiently with each other.However, chapters deserve to be more lengthy, as numerous actions/events are barely mentioned and never sought upon in detail. Other mistakes are mostly English languages ones, so if you see some, leave a comment for the author to improve!