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A rather spicy and feisty bit of a book with charecters that make you want to go back to church. but its still kinda fun to read i suppose. Will have to see how it goes.

I really must say, I have those two chapters out there and I can feel so many similarities with the mc and me. His life, his parents. Give this book a chance.

This is a great story. The mc Leon? A lot were put in his development despite me being just 4 chapters into the story. The world feels fresh, and unique. The narration is vivid, and well structured.

Daniel Carter has mysteroius powers that he dosen't know about.His powers always blend in with his game and is trying to destroy his career as a footballer as he is being hunted by unknow forces which he later finds out about.For more information read the book

This is my first time ever reading a novel so i don't know how this type of story goes but I Can tell by the quality of the story keep on writing I will read hmm maybe i will a story myself inspired by you😄

I really enjoyed the world-building and the unique concept of your story. The way you introduced the characters made them feel real and engaging, and the pacing kept me hooked. However, there were moments where the exposition felt a bit heavy, slowing down the momentum. Some parts could benefit from more natural dialogue to enhance the flow. Overall, it’s a great read with a lot of potential—I’m excited to see how the story develops!

10/10 Keep up the great work! Looking forward for more.

Hi there, I'm the author. If you decide to readthis book, I hope you like it and let me know what you think. I'll give you a preview of what you can expect. Despite similarities in past events, Etarion is a completely different world from Earth. The first few chapters start at a bit of a slow pace, to give a brief insight into everything but pick up fast after.In addition to various races , you may be familiar with a few like Elves, Orcs, Beast Folks, Demi-Humans, and many game-like elements, it has a lot of mysteries surrounding MC. There are also monsters with mixed bloodlines and demon lords.Note: I will post reference images of the Mc and the various creatures in the book in the character references section.Everything about the creatures is described in detail.I hope you enjoy reading the book, and please share your thoughts in a review or comment!This won't be a harem, but I won't give any spoilers. I hope you like it.

I hope the author updates soon well look forward to your updates

Everything is (almost) perfect, I loved the story and I even have it still after months that it is not updated, I just hope the author comes back and puts a 5-star review