Reincarnated with Nexus System

The grammar and typos make this a slightly annoying read. The nicknames are cringe. The FL isn’t really my cup of tea in terms of her behavior. Admittedly, I did drop this book early because I was just unable to get into it, so I don’t know if the story gets better.

So, I did try to give this story a try and it shows some promise. My main issue is how passive the MC is, this on top of the fact it has no tags makes me worry.To many good books have been ruined by massive MCs, I get wanting to build up the MC and show them grow into their role. However, with the personality of most of the females around him it makes me hesitant to continue reading.It is an interesting idea behind it and once it has tags or some sort of guarantee that The MC will change. I would be willing to come back and give it a second shot.

his book was about a bird who didn't yet know how to fly.The bird has to decide if it will try to fly, but it was not sure if it wants to. The bird thought, "If I never forever endeavor" then I won't ever learn. On one wing, he worries he might fail and on the other wing he thinks of how he may succeed. He worries that if he tries, he may get lost in the world. That makes him want to stay in his nest where he's safe.I think this book would help other children to learn that trying new things can be scary, but sometimes when we try, we can find things that make us happy too. And this book will help others know that mistakes are okay and part of learning.

the story the characters the background ,i like everything  but for some reason the author stoped writing a long time ago ,please stop torturing me ,i don't care if it's slow update i just need to read  the next update

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Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!

A very interesting story indeed! It's quite nice seeing steampunk/cyberpunk novels here where cultivation, system, and magic are more prominent. Kudos to the authors who updates twice a day! That's a feat. Highly recommended! I've got no problem with the grammars, very smooth language, and for the story progression, well I've got to read more to see... Update the synopsis maybe? and the cover, the two things that catch the reader's eyes yeah? >u<

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