You've built the world in the story quite well. I don't know how the upcoming content will be, but Jonas' world-building is pretty solid. However, I think if you do the same for the remaining 24 characters, it might take quite a bit of time. There are a few holes, but they’re not significant. Respect for the effort you’ve put into your story.

GOOD NOVEL SHEER UP FELLOW DAOIST!!!                                                                                                                  

The book definitely has great potential and I'm coming back to read too, great story development ! I hope to see more of your book and how it all unfolds

Hello there, dear reader. The author here with the first review—and a shameless one at that. I want to clarify a few things about the story.Although the story is categorized as R18 and will contain plenty of scenes of that nature, the focus will primarily be on the plot.Additionally, there will be no harem. I know, that might be disappointing, but as I said, the story comes first. That said, I won’t hold back on R18 scenes if that’s a concern.The first arc will feel somewhat like a cozy fantasy—but not entirely. You’ll see!The second arc will be an epic fantasy. And I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t excited to write what I’ve planned. I can only hope to bring my imagination to life with the best words possible.I won’t say more to avoid spoilers, but know that I will write this story to its very end—first for my own satisfaction, and then for my dear readers.This is Loreem for you.Thank you, dear readers.

This novel keeps surprising me! Just when I think things will get better, another twist comes.                                                   

i will have more chapters coming soon so

For Now everything looks good lets see how it progress.but as i think this is just the first novel i have read with such a intresting storyline i hope the author doesnt fuck it upp

I'm done with the first volume and now I'm on chapter 31! wow this keeps getting better!

I finally found a gem in trash novelsHAREM? NAHROMANCE? I DONT THINK. ( HOPE IT WILL NOT HAVE ROMANCE)COLD MC? YESSMART MC? YESTHIS NOVEL IS MASTERPIECE .....THE ONLY PROBLEM I HAS ITS UPDATE MAN WE NEED MORE CHAPTERS!(Hahaha i should stop the glaze)

Hi, will you continue translating the novel or has it been dropped?

I just finished reading your book, and I have to say, it’s absolutely fantastic! I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to offer a few tips that might help boost the performance and visibility of your book even more. I believe these could take your work to the next level

Really good but at the  half way point of the story, it seems like some chapters are skipped.