A Journey to the Light

Great novel

Ignore the trolls. There is a crappy anime and manga. Some watched that and got the wrong idea. This is an interesting novel that combines cultivation with magic and a modern setting. It does take a little bit to get into it. I think this story has a fun mc with a lot off good fight scenes. Are character has an advantage. Most people start off with one power and then gradually get more as they level up. He starts off with two. I like the waxia elements with the modern setting. Give it a shot.

Story has a good premise, but the writing needs some work.The transition (at least for the first good bit) is very rough, at times contradicting itself, or not making sense.The pacing is wildly inconsistent as well, which makes following along a bit difficult.Lots of unnecessary repetition and/or rewording of information, sometimes for entire chapters.Main character is supposed to be very smart, but does some really stupid things, such as throwing away all his advantages (stealth, range, first attack) to rule-of-cool the boss instead.If you can read though this (and ignore some bizarre world building choices) it looks like it could be fun.

I gave it such a low rating because the mc is a retard. this is literally a copy of am a cultivoR big shot type of story where people think the mc is a kind of big without the mc even knowing.

It's alright if you don't mind reading contradictions. The title is bs, he's all abou 't forming a team even before it begins, and he cuts himself as a form of pain resistence training since forever...He also apparently had dreams about the apocalypse and didn't do Jack to prepare other than cutting himself.Flashbacks are poorly indicated if at all.Its an alright read if you don't mind feeling you read a poorly translated wuxia novel with great grammar and western names.That said, that's only up until it gets monitized and if there really isn't anything else to read. Its like listening to a little kid spewing off his fantasies about how this and that character he imagines is better because if yours does this, his will have a special item or prep to do that, and then when you bring the slightest Incling of logic into play, not even pragmatism but simply, I thought you said he is this and that, then obviously he's that too but the new and better thing more so.Get it? There's no lasting definition in anything. First chapter paints him as some sort of bullied unfortunate self destructive lonely emo kid that can see the future, and the next he's calling his friends, mostly girls to get away from the windows cuz the sun is bad and takes of his mystical glasses of a clear stone that blocks his future sight abilities that he found as a kid cuz else he be like cyclops with his lazer beams so he needs tha mystical glasses to block his future sight...Ya get it? No? Exactly. That's what the story is like.

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