The story has a great foundation. I'd like to read more about this story. Although there are still room for improvements, but overall it was a great book.

This is my first time reading a novel with an ancient Chinese setting since I usually read modern ones. But I fell in love with this story right away! 😍 It kept me curious and excited for the next part. The story is super enjoyable and never feels boring. I even forgot about my sadness while reading it.

I really enjoyed the story and I hope to get the next part soon! I noticed some spelling mistakes, but I’m not sure if they come from the translator or if they are actually in the text. Either way, it’s an excellent novel! I especially liked how the protagonist, who once made others tremble, is now the one being hunted. Truly, hats off to you!I’d also love to hear your thoughts on my novels Between Shadow and Light and The Zodiac Mages.

all well and good except chapters repeating the same content. do far I have read 3 chapters back to back with the same content and it's getting a bit grating to see a good story becoming irritating for the authors need for word count or chapter update. disappointed!

Keep updating please!!!Interesting start

Personally, I like this novel. I won't say much to the readers except asking them to read a few chaps first.To the Author,Like I mentioned above, I like this novel. The only issues I am having is with it being rushed at the start. I wish you would have explained some things more. Like what an Osprey is? Maybe share a link with AI generated designs of the different things you are mentioning in the novel. Also, please add some more details in almost everything. Otherwise its a nice novel that I will continue reading.

The novel is good Character development is great You’ve love the novel as much as I did Can’t wait for an update tho

"A Promising and Engaging Read!"⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐This webnovel seems like a must-read for fans of [genre] with its intriguing premise and dynamic storytelling style. The synopsis alone captures a unique blend of [action,adventure,dark horrors], promising an adventure that keeps readers hooked from start to finish.The characters appear well-crafted, with depth and complexity, and the world-building looks immersive and full of surprises. The balance of action, drama,horror and mystery seems to make this a standout in its category.Highly recommended to anyone looking for their next obsession in the [fantasy] genre!

It is pretty interesting I just hope the author posted more. I really recommend it. The story writing was a bit rough at the beginning but it actually got better with time and the main character is very relatable. All in all i sat it's a pretty good beginning for a scary story

Ngl I really expected this story to be a cliche romance story where the fl and ml have an enemies to lovers trope but didn't expect it to be this addicting. Yes, addicting. While the story is still an enemies to lovers one, what I'm loving about this story is that despite having a fixed trope, it also delves deep into the other factions of the story, like important roles played by other characters and so on. It gets locked on a but early, but the first nine chapters were enough for me to get hooked enough to know more. Great job author! Please update!

An interesting idea, although it is almost completely removed from the shadow slave, but I will not condemn it. The only thing is a lot of awards to the hero.

This novel is amazing! The story progresses while maintaining both mystery and suspense at the same time. It doesn’t just focus on a single character's perspective but instead presents different characters' viewpoints within the chapter, effectively conveying emotions.I especially liked the way the fight scenes were written, particularly in Chapter 3, as well as the revelation of the horrifying experiment that Ginta is conducting.The only remark I have is that, at times, there are separate info dumps that provide details about the world. In my personal opinion, it would be better to integrate them naturally into the chapter at appropriate moments rather than presenting them separately. However, this is just a minor note and doesn’t significantly impact the story.Thank you, author! Keep up the great work—your novel is truly fantastic!