Alfheim's Visitor

Good novel :3.

Even though story just started I'm already feeling super excitied for whats to come. Only issue I have is that its following the cliche sister plot all vrmmorpgs follow in novels.

Got to chapter 64 now. The “supposed” start. I don’t mind lengthy explanations, so no problem in taking your time world building. The writing quality (grammar and structure) is good. Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop:-The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character.- The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more?- The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank.- There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really?-For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.

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Who would win roman empire at its peak and the emperor is Augustus Caesar and his generals is Scipio Africanus, Gaius Marius, Pompey, Sulla and all of them are injected with super soldier serum and all it's military vs the army of Azog who would win

'It's the moment of truth' Yu Yan thought sadly.

After they went away it was lifeless again.

As soon as, he heard this, Jett opens his eyes and look at the profile image. It was that girl indeed. However, he quickly calms himself.