Hi, another mandatory shameless self-review.I hope you enjoy this story; I went out of my comfort zone and wrote a story that focuses at least 60% romance and the last few (30%) is mostly the lore of the story.Hopefully you all enjoy this, sorry if there would be grammatical errors. English is really not my first language

Wow. This is a new tale to be familiar with. What myth did this come from?Writing Quality. Great writing style. Updating Stability. Consistently updated. Story Development. The pace wasn't so fast but it's a bit slow. Character Design. Described along way. The hero is a teenage boy with a big dream but is more pulled by responsibility because of his father's death at an early age. He sounds more mature than his actual age, doesn't he? World Background. Interesting village from old times with men wearing loincloth.I look forward to Mmwana's journey to be the best warrior that he will become. Keep going, author!

Very good chapter one and the idea is not bad keep writing!!

The story is very good. I liked the concept of neyris and blessings . The story has a lot of offer waiting for new chapters . I hope the next chapters qre as fun to read as the first 3 chapters.

I can't even know where to start reading

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this story has amazing potential. Unfortunately, I couldn't even reach chapter 10 due to how jarring it is to read. There are so many grammatical issues; it's honestly surprising how many people have stuck around to read. if anything, though, it proves how much potential this novel has. I encourage the author to take the time and edit his chapters more carefully. good luck. I'll check in on this book in a month or two. If the Grammer improves, so will my review.

this is a greart book you should read this if you are a fan of fantasy and super powers

I have seen similar books to this before and I really like them but this stands apart a little cause even if they are able to evolve they don't have the able to cross to another race entirely and really looking forward to seeing the MC's final form

I'm really impressed with the quality of the story. It starts off a little on the dark side but the plot and characters grab your attention. The bond that is created between the ML and his fellow examinees is truly extraordinary and heartwarming considering their circumstances. Truly looking forward to what's to come once they enter the academy. I recommend this story if you like adventure and mystery since ML is still learning about his system 😉

keep it up man, love the kind of story your going for here🙌🏻

It's interesting and quite intriguing, it's worth a real shot