Defying the Rogue Alpha

Hi, I'm a huge fan of your work! I recently finished reading your book and was thoroughly impressed. I'd love to offer some suggestions on how to further boost your book's success and reach an even wider audience. Would you be open to hearing my ideas?

Eu gostei dessa novel,tem muito potencial. também é interessante o jeito que o protagonista age e pensa , o jeito que mostra a realidade brutal da natureza de matar ou morrer. Muito bom mesmo espero muito dessa novel

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The novel started off a bit slow but was great overall. In the first few chapters, the MC takes some time to build an emotional connection, but the transition involving the maid's sudden discard felt abrupt. It could’ve been handled more smoothly to build emotional tension.I've read around 45 chapters so far, up to the point where Gracile kiss the MC and goes to her home. The biggest issue I’ve noticed is that many chapters after chapter 15 could’ve been shortened or even removed entirely. I ended up skipping quite a few of them as they felt repetitive and dragged out. Honestly, I wanted to quit at that point, but the romance  with the maid kept me reading .The author focuses more on the brighter side of the noble family, which I found refreshing and appreciated.I’ve only read less than 50 chapters in one go, skipping or fast-forwarding the repetitive or non-plot-related chapters. After finishing My House of Horrors, I tried some other novels like The Way of Kings, but I couldn’t get through the slow pacing. I also tried several titles on Webnovel, but finally found this one that kept me hooked through the first 50 chapters.I don’t have much time, but I’ll continue reading whenever I’m free. My request to the author would be to slightly increase the pacing, make every chapter plot-driven, and maintain a good balance between tension and romance. It feels like a pure romance novel at times, even though it’s supposed to be fantasy—but it’s still really good. So keep writing. Best luck.Additional Note: Please try to apply the "show, not tell" technique—it will make the story much more engaging and enjoyable.Sorry, I’m writing this review based only on the first 50 chapters. I’ll edit and update it after reading more.

For those like to read good novel with story this is best choice. This novel is different from usual dungeon type novels which reveals around level up and heram. It gave more preference to story then any other thing ( which makes novel good to read ). One thing I wise change is make chapters large ( while reading I feel like when I started to read and end in few seconds

I Love your story,it's entertaining and enticing all through. I can not wait to read the end of the passionate love story. Can't wait for more author 🙏

This story’s a straight-up KO! From page one, you’re dropped into a killer world with razor-sharp characters and a plot that doesn’t quit. Action, strategy, and mystery blend so slick, you’re hooked before you know it.  The lead? Brilliant, magnetic, and nothing like the usual tropes. Dialogues smack you in the face, twists land just right, and the vibe is just PURE FIRE. Every big moment hits hard, and good luck putting it down at chapter’s end. if yo love smart stories, real stakes, and characters with soul? Don’t sleep on this. 5 stars, hands down!

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