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sapient3JH
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Good novel so far and I know it this is Tue type that would captivate you and make you wanting for more.Am really loving it.
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This is the best SoL novel I read!The world building and connecting the emotions of the various family members of the MC in combination with the growth of the character is amazing!It is a really unique novel and the first novel I give a complete 5 stars and totally mean it.Because it is absolutely captivating!Keep up the good work, and when it comes to the major events in the future, please try to keep the MC with a healthy and positive mindset, because her past life already was quite depressing enough.Thank you for the consideration.
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so far loving this work honestly. I love the way it is progressing smoothly and seamlessly.
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Hello, this is the author of The Rise of The Crimson Knight, allow me to shamelessly review my own story to provide some clarityThis novel is my original work. My hope is to produce a webnovel with the consistency and quality of some of the staples in here. Hence I will do my utmost best in keeping up a regular updating schedule and will upload chapters with decent word counts without affecting its quality. I have a been reading novels, traditionally and on the web for a long time hence I know how demanding reader expectations are so I will work hard to meet your expectations.I wanted to make a long running serialized sci fi story with great worldbuilding and lore, but also make it fast paced and exciting like the books I like to read. A lofty goal, I know. But I'll do my best to reach it. With this in mind, I decided to play around with the common tropes.There's a lot that's coming that you lot are familiar with; a system, an academy arc, tournament arcs, war arcs, dungeon arcs and all that, with my own unique twist. This story is based on stories that I love and have been inspired by, more so space operas and military Sci-Fi. There are shades of warhammer 40k, Dune, Mass Effect, Halo, and red rising. If you like such stories, of heroes in space waging wars then tag along, you're in for a ride. Hope I make it all the way. My chapters will be fairly long, so It will be a chapter a day, for the foreseeable future. Don't worry, no padding, all chapters are mini arcs within themselves, having planned this beforehand. I wish to improve as a writer so constructive criticism is welcome. Reviews are appreciated. Enjoy the ride.
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This would be great. From the synopsis you can tell.
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My brutally honest review after reading all the published chapter Firstly the writing and story development is not bad however they are some issues with clarity as Junior a crown prince was getting stood up by a regular maid since the novel hadn't reviewed anything about the maids background I am assuming its just a regular maid who somehow had more authority than the protagonist suppossed sister and had the status to think about talking to a prince with a tone of an adult lecturing a naughty child mannerSecondly there are quite a number of cring shit which could potentially cause readers to stop following your bookThirdly the encounter between Junior and his sister especially how they made up was quite forced and heavily unrealistic saying some words like I love you at the end, from what I understand he had no place to say that even tho he wasn't actually the one who had treated her badly, it was even more absurd as the maid didn't feel something wrong as the protagonist who suddenly had a change of heart starts calling out strong words like i love you also dont get started on the latest chapter the protagonist literally said he loved someone he just met and Helen got jealous about that ? Helen didn't even seem to be in love with the protagonist before that and to add Junior was a total jerk so unless she had special preferences that was just forced in other to have her as a potential harem memberNevertheless it wasn't actually as bad as I expected and managed to keep me interested at least until the last chapter so Ill rate it a 4.0
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give your opinion! and please reply i would love to know!π
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everything has been nice so far especially the story developmentstill dunno how youl'llintroduce this keal still in chapter 3 lol ππ
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Decent but ruined by some plot holes. I also don't like the fact that the author spent like 3 chapters just for the mc to blind the side villain's eyes and telling them to scram. Like why did you even drag it that long it could have been completed in less than a chapter, that scene was just full of over explaining.
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The story is funny π and lighthearted, not too many angst to give you a headache π€.
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Nice novel. Waiting for more chapters.
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Unique story line with a tiny infant πΆ as the main character but has the mind of a grown woman. Nice π reading and will continue to follow
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