I wish this could go on for  thousands of chapters.

Rewrite in progress! Stay tuned! The story won't change, but it will come back with better quality and less rushing ahaha.Hugs from your Karl!

There is a noticeable improvement in the plot and style of the novel compared to the early chapters. I will continue the novel from now on.

well dont't know what to write but this is my second book so I hope everyone likes it

Thank you for this book author look forward for future chapter! Great work author waiting for the next chapter totally recommended also the mc internal conflict is peak! I really recommend this visual novel to anyone to look forward to.

These types of books are always worth the time,loved reading it. Waiting for more chapters of this.

I’ve read your novel, and it’s amazing! The world you’ve created is so detailed and pulls the reader in completely. The characters are really well written, each with their own personality and depth that make them feel real. This novel is truly excellent and shows your talent so well!I’m a passionate Commissioned based digital comic artist with a knack for crafting immersive worlds and dynamic characters. My expertise lies in creating custom, high quality comic art.I will offer budget friendly prices and discounts. I also have been transform a script inspired by your story.Let’s collaborate to make your vision a reality, and I’d love to discuss your project. My work is Available on Linktree and on Deviantart.Further. Feel free to contact meon discord: emily_jamess_ My Twitter ( @EmilyClair_)Hoping for a positive response. Thanks

As a famous quote once said, "A parasite thrives not on its own greatness, but on the lifeblood of others

One thing I like about this book is there's a mix of hard and soft magic system. The author doesn't try to infodump us but introduce the system slowly as the story progresses so we could understand it easily. The main character also feels relatable. She's not a damsel in distress or fkin mary sue. She's not perfect and has some flaws but she could cover it and solve her problems with her intelligence, logic, and quickthinking.

From Sand to Field: A Center-Back's Dream é uma história envolvente que mistura elementos de futebol com o mundo dos jogos e do desenvolvimento de personagens. A jornada de Cleiton, um jovem com sonhos de se tornar um grande zagueiro, é construída de maneira cativante, com desafios e missões que testam sua determinação e habilidades.O autor consegue equilibrar perfeitamente o ambiente real do futebol com o lado fantasioso do sistema de missões e recompensas, criando um mundo único onde o protagonista não só se enfrenta em campo, mas também lida com os obstáculos impostos por um sistema misterioso que o acompanha. O estilo de escrita é fluido e fácil de acompanhar, mantendo o leitor engajado a cada novo capítulo.A narrativa traz uma boa dose de ação e reflexão, com momentos de superação que fazem o público torcer por Cleiton e seus colegas. A introdução de elementos como treinos virtuais, elixires e a evolução do personagem adiciona uma camada extra de profundidade à trama.Se você é fã de histórias que misturam esportes, fantasia e desenvolvimento de personagem, From Sand to Field: A Center-Back's Dream com certeza vai te agradar.

just came for the free fp given for review

We are only a few chapters in but I’m so concerned that I can’t turn away😅😅