I saw my soul came out of me, after reading chapter 1-5, anger flaws my veins now. 🥹😅🤣😂anyway. This is my first time reading this genre, but I was quickly hooked by the opening!  Your novel has intense emotional depth and intricate character development. I love how the story starts with the two main leads meeting again, and their heated arguments immediately draw the reader in. It sets up the tension and flaws in their relationship perfectly.  I haven't finished reading yet, but I can already tell your story will attract many readers, especially those who love this genre. Your writing quality is *chef’s kiss*! Keep up the great work, author!  Luna father is... ⚔️🤬 sir your undeserving piece of sheets! sheets! of papers!

cool martial art light novel, well writtrn story plot i like mc fighting art i sudjust to add system on it, add more humor to hook and attract reader i already add it on my collection book, so keep going and update daily.

Once again, here we go everyone. This is a selfish and shameless five star review from the Author. Even though it's my first time writing this kind of story, I'll try my best and hope that you feel it. If you have any thoughts, please make sure to add them in the comment section or simply write a review, expressing your true thoughts. With that, I wish you a good day, dear readers.

Everything is great. This webnovel is just my type and I'm pretty sure it will gain popularity soon if it just unfolds nicely and i was not sure about the background tho

😂sorry the synopsis got me but it's a great story ❤️I look forward to it

it is peak.Didnt expected that failed writer will write a harem novel.

So far this story is good. But there are some improvements that can be made. Try and make chapters a bit longer. Story is getting a bit too fast paced so try and slow things down. Other than that it’s good. It had a lot of good potential

A very good novel. I was impressed by how the events unfolded and the smooth flow of the storyline. The dialogues are well-written, and although the descriptions are somewhat weak, they don't detract from the overall reading experience.

Came Across this accidentally,  but found it intriguing seems like a mc that can be related not exaggerated like many novels.

Too early to judge the story but I'm leaving this review. Will come back again once this reaches 30+ chapters. Mc is bit sassy through out the entire story. There is also a system which somehow gives him mission and quest what to do

A writer myself, I have to say this novel was quite interesting. It was quite unexpected at a particular point, after the plot had been developing for a while. You see I though they were going to go accomplish their goal, but they were actually just following along with their predetermined destiny. I was pleasantly surprised by the creativity of the author and the uniqueness of the characters. 10/10 would recommend to a friend. 11/10 would continue to read.

NiceFantastic            Mind blowingExcellentLet's start fighting tournamentHow will you direct the story between ----Hua failing and Yun Xi-CIA qiangue and Du Zhang