Time of the Avenger

I quit after reading 150 chapters on mtl novel, no character development at all. It gets repetitive after that. I won't recommend it. You guys can give it a try

I would like to say that you are looking for comedy, cultivation, lots of events, and a MC that makes you to shake them and laugh at them, then this is the novel.The chapter starts off with a chase and you already get the idea of what is happening off the bat.I enjoy reading about Lee Tao cause Author writes him in an entertaining comedic way!Keep it up Author!!

Alright. If you are looking for something proper that makes sense. Then this isn’t for you. If you just want randomness that will be funny then sure.  And before some idiot comes and say how I am being a troll. I will list it out. 1. The author tries way too hard to make the MC seem so good at this game. His struggle is so much so it makes him so great. Smh. Meanwhile no game like this would sell with such crappy features. Unless this is the alpha and major ass updates are needed. 2. Super big plot contexts that contradict. And a game that is so super advanced and supposed to apparently be a lighyear ahead pioneer shouldn’t have such. Smh. 3. The forcefulness of the pushing realistic VR to combine game elements and reality to the point that it doesn’t make sense. It’s like the author wants a reincarnation VR story but doesn’t do it as good as legendary mechanic or others. 4. I have seen reincarnation system stories with more believable and sensible system management. 5. It honestly feels like the author has never played any proper games or read and learnt from VR game stories. It has so much wasted potential. But that is just my point of view. I’m a serious gamer so I am fickle about the gaming aspect.

I really like Ancients World, so I decided to try this as well, and I really like it too.The story is good, and I like how your character skills work in the real world as well. Keep up the good work! 👍

I'm liking the fact that the main character is starting to grow. Not going to lie and say that I was a little off put by how dense the main character was. But the fun this is that the succubus inside her head is doing a good job of steering her where she needs to go. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this pans out.

I'm going to start off with your imagery is really good and you excel in descriptive writing. I can imagine the scenery inside my head.  The flow is really good and everything connects very well. I can already see hints of what Theodore's personality is like in first few chapters! Great Job!

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