The Rebellion: Awakening

Hello, I am Lonelythree and this is the first time I am reviewing my book and want to tell you something.First, this book would follow a mixed pov writing style with a majority in the First person and some parts third person.Secondly, this novel would follow a mix of fantasy, lore, secret groups, evil religion, evil gods, the Academy, and Mc having its followers so you can expect a great number of things.The pacing would be a bit slow and world-building would be crafted phase by phase so that there isn't much info dump.This is my first novel with a serious story with a lot of things going so I might make mistakes but do suggest corrections and remind me of plot holes.Before you form your opinion, I would ask you to read the first 20-30 chapters before disliking or commenting on it.Constructive criticism is accepted but doesn't just give 1-star with no feedback and filled with symbols. Give 1 star but have a say about what you disliked and what can be improved.

This is a really nice story, I'm not a fan of first person POV but the author did a great job in writing. The synopsis is really nice and the story is something worth reading

Suddenly the bright moon was casted by the clouds. I felt Anlon's arms around me as I wept. I opened my eyes looking up at him, his handsome face casted with concern and tender kindness.

Okay, I eat my food right away. "Hmmmm."

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"Ow! Which bastard hit me!"

Ha…...Eugene, do you really need to charm every woman you see? See, now she's all flustered and weird.

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