hi it's the author , this book is just a personal thing, but i decided to just publish it here ... anyway Ultimately, readers can expect a dark, immersive, and thought-provoking story that combines action, emotion, and mystery—leading to a climactic journey of self-discovery, survival, and the emergence of a powerful force tied to ancient secrets.

I love how the story goes. I have unlocked the privilege system for me to read ahead of everyone as well lol

So far its going a way i really really like and i cant wait for new chapters, Im hoping for some genuinely satisfying events in the future chapters

the Great Desolate Heaven-Imprisoning Finger！Is it the way you envisioned it in your mind?                                                               

Such an as-(Stares at barrel of thy pew pew) Ahem- Very very good writing, I enjoy it so far, keep up the very high quality work my introverted friend

Great story, nice flow and detailed well thought out characters, I am still wondering why the author doesn't want to go premium but it's good to build a fan base first and this tale will get it. Keep on writing! As an invested reader I will keep waiting for the next chapter! 😉

It's such a great experience to learn from a pro at horror👍 I love the setting, and the built up tension👍 Allen is a complex fella with a busy mind, mostly I think he should focus on himself.

"Papyri of Thebes" is an engaging and thrilling novel that takes you on a journey full of mystery and conflict. The detailed world-building and complex characters make the story vivid and captivating. However, at times, the pacing feels rushed, with some moments deserving more depth to enhance the emotional impact. Still, it’s a compelling read that leaves you eager for what’s next!

extremely well written and great. that's all I can think of. characters have very distinct personality and dialogues floe naturally and not to mention it's very well written too.

The story is out of this world, it's impressive and intense. I love the way the author introduced the characters and how the story is playing out.I hope it gets contracted and the author gets his deserved recognition.I recommend it for every reader out there.

It's certainly very well written, with a nicely established world background. There are a few grammatical errors, but the meaning gets across well enough. The proceedings are interesting, with a sustained tension, and the schemes and machinations involved are fun to read.I personally liked how a seemingly desperate situation was gradually overturned, all due to the efforts of the protagonist. The trials were also constructed well, making them seem like an important event, rather than a random examination that could have been covered in a chapter or two, as most hunter exams in novels tend to be. So many chapters spent covering hunter exams should normally be a negative, but in this case, it is quite the opposite.However, the character designs could have been handled better. For some reason, the author chooses to give sexual undertones to every interaction the protagonist has with a woman. They are always flirtatious in nature, with the protagonist reciprocating to a certain extent. Emotional infidelity is a complex topic, but I'm sure most would agree when I say that it's not fair to his wife. The male characters introduced are almost always either eccentric and mysterious, or simply irritating in his perception. It is a repetitive setup in this sense.This work hasn't been updated in a while, so I'm not sure whether it'll be continued, but the available chapters finished on a real high note. It undeniably arouses my curiosity, and I've been left with the feeling of wanting more.

impressive and captivating. nice storyline