As an experienced and avid reader of webnovels, this novel perfectly fits into my library. I will keep reading new chapters as they come up. Overall the story is very good till now.

Sorry for being inconsistent as heck for this novel, I have exams and i needed time to prepare. And also life is just busy. I forgot to write like 10 chapters before the exam period but now i will come back to the novel and finish it!

Great work cant wait for  more arc is compelling and there is potential here give us more to work with i wanna see more of the world and its complete history what is darium who is akumo and how will this play out

Ofc perfect score agad to sa akin. First chapter palang andami ko nang questions

Pretty cool like the outlines of story the slow world building and plots . Definitely  attached to crash urge , still wondering what pair stands for? Is it just pair ?

it's actually better than it's looks, I'm just at chapter seven so I can't really say much but I want to say you're doing a great jobplease we need more Chapters

For 100 Chapters !!!                                                                                                                        

It’s an enjoyable read but there are a few issues I have with it. First, they introduced Lila as one of the love interest but we barely end up seeing her. Like legit 40+ chapters with absolutely no mention of her and the author even introduces another female character during that time and it seems the author likes her more because she gets way more screen time. I know this is supposed to be a harem but you can’t just forget one of the main female characters for that long, that’s bad writing and pacing. Then there’s the stuff with his family. Bro that was done so terribly, the author made it seem like the family really betrayed him. His own sister made his gf at the time break up with him and called him disgusting. So why when he goes to confront his family, he forgives them and basically acts like nothing happened. All that happened was that the sister cried once and the next day everything was ok. That’s not how real emotions work. It takes time to forgive someone and it’s never that easy. I’m not saying that MC should’ve been immature with his reaction, but he should at least act like what they did hurt him which it did, so why was he acting so unaffected and unbothered when he actually saw them? IMO this was bad writing on the authors part. With all that being said it is interesting and not a complete lost cause. The author just needs to step it up a notch.

Okay so like I said I will see if I like this novel but I didn't know that it was this bad okay so let me tell you why first its that everything is going to fast every word the author wrote is unrealistic why is a new born child talking and walking? This really is confusing me I know there magic in the world but that still doesn’t explain why she talking and walking the author should have just skip this whole thing and make her older but we have to sit here to wait for her to grow up none of this makes sense it wasn’t even the harem that got me to stop reading it, it was the plot I just don’t get what’s happening. It seems that the author took inspiration from a anime but was done poorly. Please do give me info on what happening because this novel was one of the most confusing novel i ever read why where you making the mc like this and what was the thought process behind it.

Hey there guys, I like this story since I created it.so, if you guys liked it too or didn't like at all, then please leave some reviews, to help me improve in those area.Well, that's it, see you guys soon, enjoy it in the meantime......

time for a review. i've been reading this for almost a month (im upset that i didn't find this gem sooner) and five chapters in, i got hooked. this book has great character relationships and world building (so far)! you'll occasionally say "awww" whenever the main character interacts with her little sister because you could feel their love for each other through the screen. now, it's not just her little sister, the people around her trust her so much that you'll question their motives. i could already tell that there will be a twist on a twist on another twist and it will make my jaw drop. i also saw the author's comment on another review saying that there will be male and female love interests, and so far, there are four love interests introduced. two female and two male.  the MC's reaction when the second female love interest suddenly made her heart go badum badum was hilarious. the romance is already brewing and things get more interesting! can't wait for more chapters to see what will happen.

It's a pretty good and interesting story, it was also very funny at times but the harem kinda ruined it for me.'OH wow the MC is the only person who doesn't get scared of my cold/mean personality, now I like him''The MC was nice to me when I was a child and now he is the only thing I can think about, he is my everything''When I broke through to the Golden Core realm the MC had to rape me in order to save my life, now I'm in love with him'And so far, all the girls are okay with him having multiple girls or simply ignore it.It does not make any sense. If you're going to put romance in your novel then at least do it well, doing a harem is the most laziest and unoriginal type of romance there is.